Fortunes of War

Train, sidings, chaos, meaning Scared to look, reasoning, vision Closed doors now opening, sighs Confusion abounds, shouting Bullets flying, pouting guards, snipped Warred crimson spills Previous defiance lies with no voice Empty they, embraced with death Elation, turmoil, as to where I am, confused Being me, scared to step out, sunlight Approached, a gentle calm Breathing to hyper, in gasp, now lost where I am My eyes wide in open stare, beware Calmness abounds to an American sound I'm free .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/25/2014 3:09:00 PM
solid write about war and its angst.. so painfully, beautifully written , prince.. huggs
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James Fraser
Date: 7/25/2014 3:12:00 PM
Thank you Princess (((( hugs )))) back. Have a lovely weekend :)x
Date: 7/24/2014 1:23:00 AM
Oh James, WAR what a horrible word and FREEDOM what a lovely word, very well written my friend. Take care..........Vera..........
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Date: 7/25/2014 12:13:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words Vera, have a lovely weekend, James :)
Date: 7/23/2014 10:37:00 AM
Exciting piece, James, and with a twist. Love, daver
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James Fraser
Date: 7/23/2014 3:58:00 PM
Thank you Daver, such a joy to see/read your comment, James....
Date: 7/19/2014 11:38:00 AM
This Is Somewhat Profound As In Deep, Chilling To The Core Of They Whom Could Never 'Truly' See ? Insanity 125....KLove *
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