Nette Onclaud Poet Dodoitsu

Fortune Reading

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*wise Sybil crystal gazes
tracking fortune shaped by stars
magical readings drift by…
her veiled head surprised

for what has yet to happen,
in my moonstruck gaze she peeps
bound by heavenly crown’s glow…
message in my eyes

“aligned souls more strung by time
laughter at beach will flare bright
love enchants richer kinship…
forget his mood shifts!”      *    




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Crystal Ball Contest Sponsored by Linda-Marie
Written by  nette onclaud
Now, for Enter the Remembering Linda-Marie:
Tribute Poetry Contest/ Andrea Dietrich

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John Loving Iii February 15, 2014 at 3:44 PM i see linda marie made her own comment here. congrads on winning her admiration as well. thanks for entering the contest or better for remembering her in our special way.

Joe Maverick February 15, 2014 at 2:23 PM Congratulations Nette on entering this piece you did for Linda-Marie's contest I am sure she would be so happy you entered it here as well.' congrats..!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 15, 2014 at 6:14 AM - First place / gold medal goes to: LINDA MARIE! - Thank you, Nette :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kayod5 Kayode February 15, 2014 at 5:36 AM Congrats on the win nette.Great tribute

Dr.Ram Mehta February 15, 2014 at 4:18 AM Lovely tributes paid to Linda Marie and congrats on the win, nette

Skat A February 15, 2014 at 12:06 AM Nette, , a wonderful tribute Remembering Linda-Marie: *Our Forever Sweetheart" ~SKAT~

Andrea Dietrich February 14, 2014 at 11:48 PM Love how you fit in mention of the beach, which she loved so much. This was unique!! Thanks for participating, Nette.

Francine Roberts September 22, 2011 at 10:27 PM congrats nette on your win in the contest, beautifully done

Sara Kendrick September 20, 2011 at 4:06 PM Congrats on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown September 20, 2011 at 10:17 AM Congratulations on your win Nette. Love, Carol

Jack Horne September 19, 2011 at 5:12 PM Amazing piece, Nette. Many congrats on your wins

David Williams September 19, 2011 at 4:32 PM Nette congrats on your great win..David

John Freeman September 19, 2011 at 1:33 PM Nette, neat to see a beautiful second place for a pretty Lady. Great to see a second place win for you. Congratulations, Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta September 19, 2011 at 8:55 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of Linda,nette

Bob Quigley September 19, 2011 at 12:49 AM A nicely written piece nette. Congratulations

Lee Ramage September 18, 2011 at 10:51 PM Congratulations on your win Lee

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 18, 2011 at 9:15 PM CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON SECOND PLACE WIN WITH THIS SPELLBINDING ENTRY LUV..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 18, 2011 at 1:15 PM ALERT..THIS IS NOT IN MY CONTEST NETTE LUV... LET ME KNOW IF U ARE ON NOW SO I CAN OPEN IT FOR ANOTHER ENTRY ..THIS ONE..LUV.. WILL BE LEAVING IN AN HOUR ..PLEASE GET IN TOUCH LUV..THANKXXX...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 9, 2011 at 11:22 AM Nette luv I changed my title for my entry so as not to confuse u ..just letting u know ..think this is what u were referring to thought PS explanation does not show Cinquain set up that way.. but I changed it for u luv..OK?

S.Jagathsimhan Nair September 8, 2011 at 11:39 AM thank u nette for the comments..nice write, hugs, jag

Wilma Neels September 7, 2011 at 3:35 PM Nette, enjoyed your ending for this one, wishing you all the best for Linda's contest ;) *hugs*

Russell Sivey September 7, 2011 at 2:47 PM What a fantastic write Nette! I like this poem a lot! It says so much in so little time! You'll do well in the contest!!

Andrea Dietrich September 7, 2011 at 2:26 PM what a cute ending this has!! Imaginative, Nette, and WOW, you must be one of my September babes I forgot you had a birthday this month. PLEASE tell me your exact date, Nette,will you?? LUv, andrea

Daver Austin September 7, 2011 at 1:30 PM You must have been present at Delphi., oh, nette. When I first started posting, I sent in practically my whole chap book, "The Sibyl." Check it out sometime. Love, daver

Kash Poet September 7, 2011 at 1:27 PM Was waiting for this beauty of you....another wonderful poem....enjoyed reading it....best wishes:)

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