Fortunate Magnolia

Why did they plant the magnolia
in the tight corner between the house
and the garage? There is no room for a tree.

Each spring, she blooms valiantly;
each summer, she stretches her branches
with the large leathery leaves
over the roof;

you cut them. Last year, 
I cried. The blossoms 
unfold in front of my window.

Today, the more fortunate magnolias
all over town already in full bloom,
she holds out a few pink buds like fingers,

and the mutilated trunk sprouts shoots,
and there is almost hope 
that something new may, once again,
grow.


From my new collection "The Eden of Perhaps", Spartan Press 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Theraven Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 1:52 AM
Agnes, Very,,, You somehow found a weakness in my armor. 'Mutilated', yet hopeful as it always is. -Richard
Carber Avatar
April 7, 2020 at 11:16 AM
I can relate-- I love seeing the wildflowers coming our in our backyard, but soon the grass will have to be cut. Congrats Agnes on your win.
Krampe Avatar
April 7, 2020 at 11:18 AM
Thank you, LJ
Salehi Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 7:53 PM
Hope is a great thing... I was captivated and mesmerized by your creativity.
Krampe Avatar
April 7, 2020 at 11:18 AM
Thank you, Pashang
Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 4:11 PM
I love the feelings you captured in this descriptive poem, Agnes. I struggle with a tree or two in my yards. In back I have a walnut tree that refuses to progress. and yet it still lives. Another back yard tree changed into two types but the pretty flowering willow part is only 1/4 remaining, and in front, we have a tree so close to the house, we had to cut it down. Made me so sad . The ornamental pear too big too. GREAT writing.
Krampe Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 7:43 PM
Thanks, Andrea. It's ever so sad to cut a tree.
Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 4:11 PM
congrats on publishing!
Warrior Avatar
April 5, 2020 at 9:06 AM
Lovely verse my friend...Magnolias rule...you are quite the virtuoso Agnes...I've checked out your youtube videos...bravo...stay safe my friend...once this is all done...I'll see you at Carnegie Hall...The Wingster :o)
Krampe Avatar
April 5, 2020 at 9:13 AM
Thank you for your ind words, and for checking out my videos, ^WW^. I appreciate your support. Stay safe & well.
Allison Avatar
April 5, 2020 at 8:26 AM
A beautifully descriptive of poem of hope which is so essential in the situation we are in today, my magnolia disappeared when we had the garden landscaped ... i suspect it flourishes elsewhere because it was in a pot!:-( hugs jan xx
Krampe Avatar
April 5, 2020 at 8:28 AM
Oh no, I am sorry somebody stole your tree. Mine is actually really in a stupid corner where nobody in their right mind should have planted a tree. But she is so resilient. I hope you're well. Hugs
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