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Fortress

Fortress Stone by weathered cobble I build, calloused hands ache in sweet surrender Mortar’d affection of a coalesced consistency, mixed and blended, bound by love’s tether Stacking to heights of protective design Patterned on roaming hillsides, serpentine wanderings, Lush green fields crawl, blue sky diversions, as song birds whistle to the day And I sweat, my brow now drenched, muscles pushed to horizonary boundaries, tattered clothes sway in late afternoon breezes Still I push on, fitting, finding, filling this need Something so precious as glistening morning dreams, crystalline musings, fragile bisque castings Destined for my world, beyond battlefield dawns, sifting serene country settings…quiet peace The long day ends, I marvel at my accomplishment steadfast and suited to defend in sunset flames, turrets of observative reachings soar above timber and heavy iron chain…gated sanctuary Now my love you may rest… beneath starry heavens and comet renderings, upon your bed of satin feathered sighs as with my love, I have built this fortress…around your heart **I was listening to the Sting song “Fortress around your heart” and was inspired to write this one. And for those who noticed, yes I did make up a few words, but I’ll just invoke “poetic license” in those cases : )

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/24/2017 3:18:00 PM
And I love Sting too :)
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Date: 4/24/2017 3:17:00 PM
May the fortress remain there forever...I am speechless to such a poem...It speaks to me...'Beyond Battlefield dawns ',He ll find her... You are an amazing poet/writer.. I'm in AWE. A Fave.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 4:48:00 PM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one and I am a huge fan of Sting. You kind words are always a bright spot in my day
Date: 4/24/2017 1:37:00 PM
I noticed, ; ) but it doesn't matter. I so enjoyed reading this poem this morning. Quite lovely. 7 ; )
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Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 2:12:00 PM
I knew somebody would. :) Thanks so very much Connie. I always smile when you visit my poetic world.
Date: 4/24/2017 1:19:00 PM
Chris, I marveled at the images you used in this ingenious poem where I thought at first you were perhaps building a fortress in the sky. The ending took me by surprise. 7 :) Amitiés
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Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 2:11:00 PM
Thank you Anne Marie for always writing such wonderful comments about my poetry. I am happy the ending took you by surprise, hopefully it was a pleasant surprise. :)
Date: 4/24/2017 11:45:00 AM
Building your love fortress like a word puzzle. Love how those pieces fit together!
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Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 11:50:00 AM
Thank you so very much Kim. I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave such a nice comment on this poem.
Date: 4/24/2017 11:41:00 AM
Wonderful imagery and I love where you went with this xomo 7 :)
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Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 11:43:00 AM
Thank you so very much Maureen and because of you, it won't come tumbling down. :)

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