Fortnight

My Doctor looked quite sheepish for he had bad news to give He looked me in the eye and said I have two weeks to live I thought about this long and hard, then told him with a sigh I'll take a week in April and the other in July

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/14/2019 8:26:00 AM

This part resonated with my soul: "Spirituality is the key And I trust in all I see." Thank you for writing this, Marissa.

Terry Flood
Date: 1/14/2019 10:10:00 AM

Hi Caren, I would be delighted if you liked my little ditty but I think you’ve somehow commented on my poem instead of one by ‘Marissa’. Just saying so you can direct your praise to the deserving person.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/14/2019 8:23:00 AM

Oh, this is so funny! Love it!