Forthcoming Summer Hiku 21

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Placed First in Your Choice P Poetry Contest of Brian Strand

Forthcoming Summer Hiku 21 summer on the w -a –y pearly s ~h ~o ~r ~e vacation dreams ~~~~~~~~ s -t -r -e -a -m -i -n -g from smartphones.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2025 12:28:00 PM

oh that's a funny last line!! Either they are not really on vacation or they are showing all their vaction pictures to their friends. Good one. Congrats

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 5/29/2025 11:32:00 PM

Hope you got me right. Wishing you a pleasant day and forthcoming weekend.

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 5/29/2025 11:29:00 PM

Thanks a lot dear poetess for appreciating the write and your kind wishes. Since summer is close at hand, i think many people would be planning their vacations, if they have not already done so, deciding when and where to spend their summer time. Hence, consulting their smartphones on the feasible options, and dreams streaming therefrom....

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/29/2025 8:07:00 AM

How well you portrayed this summer's ideal vacation in only a few words! It is enjoyable to read about your usage of this form! Congratulations on your great win!

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 5/29/2025 10:33:00 AM

Thanks a lot dear poet for appreciating the write and your kind wishes, which always cheer up my spirits. Just to say that I tried my hand at this poetry form since quite recently.... Wish you a very pleasant day.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/28/2025 11:15:00 PM

What a stunning hiku dear KG, the picture looks like Maldives! So stunning how you’ve described your summer dream vacay in just few syllables! Pleasure reading your use of this form! Congratulations on your top win! We are definitely trending #hiku yeay!

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 5/29/2025 10:23:00 AM

Thank you a lot poet friend for appreciating the write and your kind wishes. The picture could also have been Mauritius. But it is nether Maldives nor Mauritius.... I tried my pen at Hiku just recently. It is fun and pleasure combined.... Wish you a charming day and forthcoming weekend.