Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Poet Fibonacci

Forsaken

The
Young
Couple
Runaway
In a night elope
Preserving the forbidden love 
Denounced aloud by the society where they lived
Pursuancing to legalize by church and laws, the love that sparked as an volcano









For Form F Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Broken Wings
January 25, 2017
Fifth Place

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Paulette Calasibetta February 10, 2017 at 12:56 PM Wow, Nayda.....pretty powerful....congratulations! Nayda Ivette Negron Flores February 10, 2017 at 2:15 PM Thank you Paulette Nayda Ivette Negron Flores February 10, 2017 at 1:52 PM Thank you Paulette

Agnes Krampe February 3, 2017 at 6:49 PM Congrats, Nayda! Nayda Ivette Negron Flores February 3, 2017 at 7:30 PM Thank you Agnes

Kim Rodrigues February 2, 2017 at 10:16 PM Congrats, Nayda! Nayda Ivette Negron Flores February 3, 2017 at 10:14 AM Thank you Kim.

Constance La France February 2, 2017 at 9:03 PM Nayda congratulations on your win in my contest ~ Nayda Ivette Negron Flores February 2, 2017 at 10:02 PM Thank you very much Constance.

Jean Murray January 28, 2017 at 5:14 PM That was some spark. Love like that should never be denied. Nayda Ivette Negron Flores January 28, 2017 at 8:35 PM Thank you Jean.

Ashley Conte January 26, 2017 at 11:51 PM Your poem speaks volumes, very nice! Nayda Ivette Negron Flores January 28, 2017 at 8:34 PM Thank you Ashley.

Charlie Smith January 25, 2017 at 9:25 PM Lovely, best wishes Nayda,,, Nayda Ivette Negron Flores January 28, 2017 at 8:34 PM Thank you Charlie.

Eve Roper January 25, 2017 at 8:00 PM Very nice, Nayda, love the last stanza.. good luck in the contest. Hugs Nayda Ivette Negron Flores January 25, 2017 at 8:38 PM Thank you Eve.