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The Young Couple Runaway In a night elope Preserving the forbidden love Denounced aloud by the society where they lived Pursuancing to legalize by church and laws, the love that sparked as an volcano For Form F Poetry Contest Sponsored by Broken Wings January 25, 2017 Fifth Place

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Date: 2/10/2017 12:56:00 PM
Wow, Nayda.....pretty powerful....congratulations!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 2/10/2017 2:15:00 PM
Thank you Paulette
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 2/10/2017 1:52:00 PM
Thank you Paulette
Date: 2/3/2017 6:49:00 PM
Congrats, Nayda!
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Date: 2/3/2017 7:30:00 PM
Thank you Agnes
Date: 2/2/2017 10:16:00 PM
Congrats, Nayda!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 2/3/2017 10:14:00 AM
Thank you Kim.
Date: 2/2/2017 9:03:00 PM
Nayda congratulations on your win in my contest ~
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 2/2/2017 10:02:00 PM
Thank you very much Constance.
Date: 1/28/2017 5:14:00 PM
That was some spark. Love like that should never be denied.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/28/2017 8:35:00 PM
Thank you Jean.
Date: 1/26/2017 11:51:00 PM
Your poem speaks volumes, very nice!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/28/2017 8:34:00 PM
Thank you Ashley.
Date: 1/25/2017 9:25:00 PM
Lovely, best wishes Nayda,,,
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/28/2017 8:34:00 PM
Thank you Charlie.
Date: 1/25/2017 8:00:00 PM
Very nice, Nayda, love the last stanza.. good luck in the contest. Hugs
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/25/2017 8:38:00 PM
Thank you Eve.

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