Forsaken

In the frozen arms of the old oak tree
A rustic birdhouse perches
Snow covered, forsaken

2/3/13
For Rick Parise's Kimo contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 2/27/2013 1:20:00 PM
Love the symbolism here. Congrats on your winning place!!
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Tanya Harrington
Date: 2/27/2013 1:25:00 PM
Oh, and the beautiful, desolate scene
Date: 2/18/2013 12:21:00 AM
This one touched me..love birds and have a collection of bird houses. congrats on your win..this goes to my favs.BG
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Date: 2/17/2013 5:45:00 AM
beautiful Kimo here Kim.Congrats on your big win in the contest.
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Date: 2/16/2013 9:50:00 AM
I see this so clearly in my mind !! Excellent ! Congratulations on your win !!
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Date: 2/16/2013 5:30:00 AM
Great descriptive and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/15/2013 7:30:00 PM
Kim.. Congratulations with your awesome win in Rick's "I'll Have One Kimo Please" have your self a goodnight~PD
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Date: 2/15/2013 7:30:00 PM
congrats on your win, excellent kimo, paints a perfect winter scene
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Date: 2/15/2013 6:18:00 PM
congrats on a fine win Kim
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Date: 2/15/2013 4:07:00 PM
Incredible, Kiim. I am glad I am finally getting to see yours. A very well deserved win. Forsaken is so strongly portrayed here!
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Date: 2/15/2013 3:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine second place Kim! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/15/2013 3:11:00 PM
Kim congrats on you big win. A great Kimo. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/12/2013 9:41:00 PM
Enjoyed the deep and cold imagery of the forsaken, image... poor bird... xox~PD
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Date: 2/5/2013 12:52:00 PM
The truth about nature is that they will always return. Good luck Kim, blessings Carl
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Date: 2/3/2013 3:52:00 PM
This is a tremendously written write my friend! You wrote a masterful poem, a truly wonderful piece, Great Work!!
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