Forsaken

In the frozen arms of the old oak tree
A rustic birdhouse perches
Snow covered, forsaken

2/3/13
For Rick Parise's Kimo contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Harrington Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 1:20 PM
Love the symbolism here. Congrats on your winning place!!
Harrington Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 1:25 PM
Oh, and the beautiful, desolate scene
Gorelick Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 12:21 AM
This one touched me..love birds and have a collection of bird houses. congrats on your win..this goes to my favs.BG
Poet Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 5:45 AM
beautiful Kimo here Kim.Congrats on your big win in the contest.
Squyres Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 9:50 AM
I see this so clearly in my mind !! Excellent ! Congratulations on your win !!
Kendrick Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 5:30 AM
Great descriptive and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Congrats on your win..Sara
Roberts Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 7:30 PM
congrats on your win, excellent kimo, paints a perfect winter scene
A   Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 7:30 PM
Kim.. Congratulations with your awesome win in Rick's "I'll Have One Kimo Please" have your self a goodnight~PD
May Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 6:18 PM
congrats on a fine win Kim
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 4:07 PM
Incredible, Kiim. I am glad I am finally getting to see yours. A very well deserved win. Forsaken is so strongly portrayed here!
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 3:55 PM
Congratulations on your fine second place Kim! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 3:11 PM
Kim congrats on you big win. A great Kimo. Warm Smiles, Connie
A   Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 9:41 PM
Enjoyed the deep and cold imagery of the forsaken, image... poor bird... xox~PD
Fraser Avatar
February 5, 2013 at 12:52 PM
The truth about nature is that they will always return. Good luck Kim, blessings Carl
Sivey Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 3:52 PM
This is a tremendously written write my friend! You wrote a masterful poem, a truly wonderful piece, Great Work!!
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