Formal Struggles

As I attempt 
to grasp poetic form 
  I stumble while 
reaching for the stars 
   I cannot stop the 
flow of words from my pen
   and do not want to 
So I will continue 
    to write blank and free verse 
Writing allows one to escape 
   the pangs of mortality 
but only briefly 
   One must still 
deal with the world as it is 
  even when one has visited 
 the land of Faerie
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 9:01 PM
ohhh, is rhyme the land of faerie then? I quite like that!!
Allison Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 3:34 PM
I can relate to this Matthew - I do step out of my comfort zones for contests but like to revert to styles i am comfortable with and I am still learning a great deal:-) hugs jan xx
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