Formal Garden

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in park like beauty tidy hedges and prim blooms ~ elegant wildness

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/13/2020 9:58:00 AM

O, Joy! 'Wild' can be as elegant as 'Tame' or 'civilized.' I t's just raw, as well --- untamed in that respect... I keep flashing back to Rudolf Nureyev. Wow. Could he leap across the stage. Wild, raw--and elegant. Nice haiku, Evelyn! :) gw

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/13/2020 6:52:00 PM

There is splendor to be found in both the tamed and the wild in nature. I agree that Rudolph Nureyev was an amazing dancer. Ballet is so thrilling to watch! Thank you for the awesome comment. :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/10/2020 9:36:00 PM

This is a very beautiful haiku Evelyn. I hope you are enjoying Mother's Day! xxoo

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/10/2020 9:45:00 PM

I've had a wonderful Mother's Day, thank you very much. I hope you had a blessed one as well. Thank you for your kind compliment. xxoo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/10/2020 9:03:00 PM

Pretty scene

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/10/2020 9:46:00 PM

My deepest thanks, Kim.