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Formal Garden

in park like beauty
tidy hedges and prim blooms ~
elegant wildness
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Wolf Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 9:58 AM
O, Joy! 'Wild' can be as elegant as 'Tame' or 'civilized.' I t's just raw, as well --- untamed in that respect... I keep flashing back to Rudolf Nureyev. Wow. Could he leap across the stage. Wild, raw--and elegant. Nice haiku, Evelyn! :) gw
Buehler Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 6:52 PM
There is splendor to be found in both the tamed and the wild in nature. I agree that Rudolph Nureyev was an amazing dancer. Ballet is so thrilling to watch! Thank you for the awesome comment. :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 10, 2020 at 9:36 PM
This is a very beautiful haiku Evelyn. I hope you are enjoying Mother's Day! xxoo
Buehler Avatar
May 10, 2020 at 9:45 PM
I've had a wonderful Mother's Day, thank you very much. I hope you had a blessed one as well. Thank you for your kind compliment. xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2020 at 9:03 PM
Pretty scene
Buehler Avatar
May 10, 2020 at 9:46 PM
My deepest thanks, Kim.
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