Joanna Daniel Poet Rhyme

Form That Has Me Charmed - Minichu

Syllables constricting,
Which takes quite some effort with a unique rhyme scheme, 
Restricting,

Careful thinking,
Childhood innocence, bizarre theme,
Clicking,

New form,
Wonderful dream,
Charm!

Syllables constricting,
Childhood innocence, bizarre theme,
Charm!


10.10.2020




For Mohan Chutani's "Let's Minichu on Writing or Not Writing a Minichu" contest

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Paula Goldsmith November 4, 2020 at 7:50 AM Congratulations on your win. It was a fun read. I need to try this. Enjoy your win and day.................

Linda Alice Fowler October 31, 2020 at 6:20 AM Nice Jo! Congratulations on the win! Linda

Mohan Chutani October 31, 2020 at 3:43 AM Jo, congrats for your placement and giving me your lovely feedback on Minichu format. Best. Mohan.

John Watt October 21, 2020 at 9:35 AM I like how you have incorporated his previous contests into this one, childhood innocence and bizarre. Clever! You make this flow nicely, Jo.

Andrea Dietrich October 11, 2020 at 12:55 PM It truly is restricting but once you get it all together it's magical!

Victor Buhagiar October 10, 2020 at 4:55 AM A new form but I am not much in contests these days. Still you did a great composition. Blessings. ~~

Regina Mcintosh October 10, 2020 at 4:09 AM This is great... I haven't tried this but it looks so difficult. Love and prayers and blessings too... Gina