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Forlorn Nights

Heal your broken heart! Lovelorn blood flows through your veins: I'm, an ask away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/30/2009 7:46:00 AM
It sure feels good to be missed. You are an angel. My life is just turned from crazy to insane. No buyers yet for my house - things are getting intense. Just want you to know I appreciate your keeping in touch. You are very sweet and I miss you too, along with this special soup. love & hugs, shar xoxoxo
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Date: 8/21/2009 6:11:00 PM
Heartfelt poem. Good use of just three lines. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 8/14/2009 9:48:00 PM
Great use of the form and a strong message ... just ask for help if you need it ... smile ...
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Date: 8/14/2009 5:12:00 PM
Delightful request>>James
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Date: 8/14/2009 4:38:00 PM
Clever and inviting. Who could resist such an earnest invitation?! Well done, Raul~ Donna
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Date: 8/13/2009 3:43:00 AM
Can ever a broken heart be healed?it can and its nice to know that somewhere someone will kiss the pain away--beautiful senryu Raul-----------charma
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Date: 8/9/2009 11:24:00 AM
It is Sunday afternoon here and I am so happy to share this time reading your fantastic Senryu Raul. Thank you for writing and sharing this one. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2009 8:49:00 AM
That last line....perfectly said by a true friend!! :)
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Date: 8/9/2009 6:07:00 AM
I love this..to let them know that you are not far away..love the piece and how you constructed it and told your point of view clearly..good work.
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Date: 8/8/2009 10:51:00 PM
This is great...sounds like one of mine. Good job my friend
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Date: 8/8/2009 9:05:00 PM
beautiful anticipation! Raul! jim
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