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Forlorn Nights

Heal your broken heart!
Lovelorn blood flows through your veins:
I'm, an ask away.

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Sharon Winter

August 30, 2009 at 7:46 AM

It sure feels good to be missed. You are an angel. My life is just turned from crazy to insane. No buyers yet for my house - things are getting intense. Just want you to know I appreciate your keeping in touch. You are very sweet and I miss you too, along with this special soup. love & hugs, shar xoxoxo

August 21, 2009 at 6:11 PM

Heartfelt poem. Good use of just three lines. Keep on writing! Karen

Sue Mason

August 14, 2009 at 9:48 PM

Great use of the form and a strong message ... just ask for help if you need it ... smile ...

James Fraser

August 14, 2009 at 5:12 PM

Delightful request>>James

Donna Golden

August 14, 2009 at 4:38 PM

Clever and inviting. Who could resist such an earnest invitation?! Well done, Raul~ Donna

Charmaine Chircop

August 13, 2009 at 3:43 AM

Can ever a broken heart be healed?it can and its nice to know that somewhere someone will kiss the pain away--beautiful senryu Raul-----------charma

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 9, 2009 at 11:24 AM

It is Sunday afternoon here and I am so happy to share this time reading your fantastic Senryu Raul. Thank you for writing and sharing this one. Love, Carol