Thompson Emate Poet Rhyme

Forlorn Moments

“Can you feel the soul of an abandoned house, can you hear the whispering.”
           Quote by _ Constance La France


Weary walls & dilapidating roof, 
Hope stands aloof,
Pleasant days are gone,
The ambience is worn.

The hands are unable,
The clime is unstable,
Gloom dwells in the chamber,
Too weighty for a serene slumber.

A sojourn on feeble bridges,
A path rife with ridges,
The soul desires quantum solace, 
Freedom from a burdened race.

The whispering of a troubled soul,
Stifled by a torn whole,
Echoes of cold silence,
The disparaging tides are in sequence.


May 29, 2023.
Writing Challenge - C Quotes - Poetry Contest,
Constance La France.

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Anne-Lise Andresen June 6, 2023 at 5:41 AM - "Echoes of cold silence ... " gives me chills ... lovely written - Congratulations on your win, Thompson - hugs Thompson Emate June 8, 2023 at 8:44 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise. I'm honoured.

Sara Kendrick June 6, 2023 at 4:02 AM Congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara Thompson Emate June 8, 2023 at 8:42 AM Thank you, Sara. I'm honoured.

Christuraj Alex June 3, 2023 at 9:08 PM "Hope stands aloof" - Beautifully written. There is a beautiful word-painting all through. Congratulations! Thompson Emate June 5, 2023 at 6:52 PM Thank you, Christuraj. It's an honour. Blessings.

Constance La France June 3, 2023 at 6:58 PM Thompson, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations and well done ! Thompson Emate June 5, 2023 at 6:54 PM Thank you, Constance. I'm honoured. Blessings.