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Forlorn Hope

He's a scared, shivering, sad, and lonely soul: today's version of a disposable man. Panhandling on the city streets takes its toll: mocked and beaten, he eats food from a trash can. Ostracized, he's stripped of any chance he had of finding love, or of becoming a dad. And yet, his heart still harbors the forlorn hope: that maybe someday, he can do more than cope.
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Ibeh Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 3:15 PM
This is a sad, powerful write that caught my eye, Emile:-) Succinct yet packs a wallop! Congrats on your win in my contest!
Pinet Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 3:23 PM
Thanks Edward, I appreciate both the placement and your comments my friend, Emile.
Hankins Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 2:57 PM
Emile, this is an outstanding piece based on an overwhelming problem. I read it and wept, not for his soul but for his life of despair. Thanks for writing this poem.
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May 13, 2021 at 6:07 PM
Yes, we do. I suspect you have a good heart, my friend, and I try very hard to have a good heart filled with love and compassion for everyone. The only things I completely abhor are bullying, bigotry, and prejudice. Thanks for your thoughtfulness.
Pinet Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 3:24 PM
Thanks Milt, we share a lot in common my friend, Emile.
Burch Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 12:08 PM
Emile, this is fabulous!! Well done!! It causes one’s heart to ache!! *tear* Best hopes for the contest!! Big huggs. Deb
Pinet Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 12:25 PM
Thanks so much Deborah, I appreciate you kind words my friend, Emile.
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