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Forlorn

To suffer from the heart’s demise, forlorn. the truth sheds light on layers of lies, forlorn. I listen each day for the sparrow’s song, yet winter brings the raven’s cries, forlorn. Lord nigh, I seek hope only you can bring. Distant smiles disclose my own disguise, forlorn. My angel descends unto the early hours. Upon her silken gowns, I close my eyes, forlorn. When oh when will I trust to love again? To think I became all I despise, forlorn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/16/2013 2:41:00 PM
Congrats on your creative winning work.Congrats ..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 11/15/2013 11:07:00 AM
Rhonda, Congratulations, on your 'Take the Leap' win............ LOVE ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 11/13/2013 12:23:00 PM
Lovely prayer asking for an angel's help, Rhonda, congratulations on your win. Nice ghazal.
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Date: 11/12/2013 8:46:00 PM
a very beautiful write Rhonda...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/12/2013 3:05:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, Rhonda
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Date: 10/10/2013 10:46:00 PM
nicely written.
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Date: 10/10/2013 10:23:00 PM
This is a gorgeous and talented write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a powerful piece such an outstanding poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/10/2013 9:54:00 PM
this is so beautifully written Rhonda.....splendid ....
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