Forlorn

As dawn it roosts, to the early lids of my opened eyes, Never ever has been a happy feeling pleasant comprise. Quinquennium back I can clearly remember, The morning’s plea scalds my thoughts like burning ember. My blanket festooned body, on the bed it stirs & moves, The immensity of my drumming head, ever hopes it improves. Rise as I to the early morn’s sunshine, Try to smile and reminiscent, it’s surely futile to whine. And so I sooth my dreary mind, Impel the mind to elude dismal thoughts & unwind. Alas! I’m timorous, those dull & dismal thoughts befall, My mind ,now I know I need to overhaul. To edify my mind I have to seek, Muse must I, think ponder reflect every day of the week. Tall happy positive thoughts I must now contemplate, For these are those that will bring me peace and joy once they ruminate. When I close my eyes to tardy nites, Am gonna be happy at morn the thought itself excites. A long dark shadow of doubt it always looms, It’s foggy dawn and my dull thoughts they resume. From dawn to dusk I carry on a low, Pessimistic spirits, they make me slow. Explicit thoughts are sought desired, A sound body and mind are always admired. Forlorn, behold it in my mind’s eyes, Set tone the work ambience my passions cries, Throttled are my dreams, dismayed are my desire, And Brutus knife it’s uncouth edge stabs the back in holy attire. In a Quinquennium span, and time it ran, But my spirit at first light is like a weary man, Now I cognize to him his destiny a bloom, And to me my destiny untwined from his , so not to doom. Must alter my retort to suit me fine, And joyous days will transcend me to cloud nine. Aghast I am for I have lost, The crusade within me and am weary exhaust. Forlorn I am to the day’s time, Often mull are they my thoughts, that are all slime. Forlorn I am to the nite’s time, I know it’s time to clean up my heart’s grime. Forlorn it will be till I inversely think, From insanity, I’m now on its brink. Forlorn ,I want to say good bye, For many eons before I die.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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A   Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 6:17 PM
Hi Sashi, Congratulations on 'Your own favorite poem contest." I truly miss reading and scanning poems from the winning contest list. Hope you are well! Always & Forever * Linda
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December 3, 2013 at 6:42 PM
Awesome win, Sashi!
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December 2, 2013 at 9:03 PM
An incredible and most interesting write, Sashi! Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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December 2, 2013 at 5:55 PM
CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN! A LOVELY POEM .
Guzzi Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 4:56 PM
A lot of thought and work in this verse! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Mehta Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 7:58 AM
Congrats on the win, Shashi. Namaste
Horsch Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 6:16 AM
Nice win Sashi, It's wonderful that we could post our favorite poems in this contest...Roger
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December 2, 2013 at 5:36 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done, Sashi !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
A   Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 10:42 AM
:-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Nathan's contest!!! awesome winning write. LOVE LOVE * Linda
Prabhu Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 4:19 AM
Thanx Linda!!
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July 2, 2013 at 7:02 AM
Sashi congratulations on your fantastic win. Enjoyed reading this great poem. Warm, smiles, Connie
Prabhu Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 11:13 AM
thank you Connie!!!!!!~sashi
A  Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 9:47 PM
Sashi, congratulations with your winning poem, in Nathan's one of your best poems. *SKAT*
Prabhu Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 11:13 AM
thanx SKAT..~sashi
D. Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 9:23 PM
congrats ' NATE
Prabhu Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 11:11 AM
thanx
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March 9, 2012 at 5:13 PM
Congrats on your 2nd place win, Sashi. Very descriptive. Thank you for your kind comments on my poems. Love, Kim
Prabhu Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 8:53 PM
thank you very much for the warm wishes Kim.... have a gr8 weekend.........~sashi
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March 7, 2012 at 5:46 PM
Very descriptive winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara
A   Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 8:46 AM
SASHI.. Congratulations! THANK YOU FOR THE SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
Brown Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 7:05 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "2nd Place Poems Only" contest Sashi. Love, Carol
Prabhu Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 7:06 AM
thanks for the wishes Carol.....~sashi
Guzzi Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 5:47 PM
Ah look who's an up and coming writer in the winners circle!!! With lines like [dawn roosts] & [mornings plea scalds] how could you not win! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Prabhu Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 6:26 PM
thank you very much Debbie . your words of encoragement give me immense joy and happiness...~sashi
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March 6, 2012 at 5:25 PM
Great job my friend. Michael
Prabhu Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 6:27 PM
thank you Michael
Sweetheart Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 4:17 PM
Sashi congrats on another powerful write and win .. elegant lines of poetic art luv..
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March 6, 2012 at 6:30 PM
thank you very much for the wishes Linda....~sashi
Brown Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 7:39 AM
Congratulations on your great win in Debbie Guzzi's "Fear" contest Sashi. Love, Carol
Prabhu Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 7:55 AM
thank you for the wishes Carol...it is with all the encouragement and wishes that motivates ink flow tot he papyrus..........
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February 12, 2012 at 6:37 PM
Awesome write. Congrats on your win in Debbie's contest
Prabhu Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 5:59 AM
thank you Samual.
A   Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 1:53 AM
Sashi , congratulations... with your wonderful win In Debbie's contest.. enjoyed your poem. have yourself a wonderful valentines~ always* xox~PD
Prabhu Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 6:00 AM
thanks for the wishes
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February 12, 2012 at 8:05 AM
thank you very much and u too have a super valenties~
Sweetheart Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 8:06 PM
congrats sashi on a wonderful win for this dynamite write so creative luv...
Prabhu Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 8:06 AM
thank you very much~
M V Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 10:17 AM
Beautifully penned,Sasi.Congratulations!
Prabhu Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 8:06 AM
thanks very much
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February 11, 2012 at 7:12 AM
Congratulations Please forgive the cut and paste congratuations I must do today it does not diminsh the feeling behind the congratulations or the quality of the work presented. mum not well need to go out xx
Prabhu Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 8:05 AM
hey , dont worry.... am greatful to you for the warm wishes
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