Forgotten Umbrellas

Umbrellas become afterthoughts once the rain has cleared away, And are left behind like discarded lovers whose partners have moved on for a brighter day. Held close and tight when the need was there; opening up to let you in; Cast aside when confidence has been restored; forgotten like an embarrassing sin. And yet, they hang around; Waiting for the next lover to come along who needs protection from the coming storm, prepared to repeat their lovelorn song. Are you the long-lost lover or the umbrella hung upside down? Do you give your all to protect those you love or do you run around?
by Joe Flach for Nette Onclaud's "SYMBOLISM: THE UMBRELLA" contest. written and posted 2/22/14 Vision #2
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Walker  Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 3:43 AM
Congratulations on the win... This poem is truly one... :)s Verlena
Kayode Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 9:13 PM
This truly deserved the win,congrats Joe.
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 8:28 AM
Joe, I remember seeing this one before and thinking you had done very well by employing symbolism as she asked. So happy to share third place with you! Big congrats.
Mehta Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 4:47 AM
Nice take on the theme of the poem, congrats on the win, joe
Andresen Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 3:03 AM
- "THE UMBRELLA" Contest (by: Nette Onclaud) for the imagination - Congratulations on your winning poem, Joe ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Collins Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 8:49 AM
Dear Joe - My umbrella sits in the garage for another rainy day. That first stanza is a piece of heaven. Oh heck the whole poem is. love, Kathy
Vaso Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What a great write! Made me smile!
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 5:36 PM
Joe, of all the pictures, I saw that the most profound statement could be made by choosing picture two. WHIch is why I am doing picture four instead hahaha (when I get around to it. A ditty is in my head rolling around. I better get to it!!) I loved how you did your symbolism
Flach Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 8:32 PM
Thanks Andrea. I will keep an eye opened for your ditty.
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