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Forgotten Tide

The busy Moon forgot about the Tide. She left it out all day upon the sand. And when it found itself alone topside, there mischief was immediately at hand. It washed the muddy Rocks until they shone, then dragged in trash to mess them up again, it chilled the chubby babies to the bone and tugged their pudgy feet to pull them in. It rearranged the peaceful ocean floor and wrapped the kelp into a tangled wreath, then turned up all the driftwood on the shore and tickled every creature underneath. It tricked the Fishermen it came across by pulling at the lines they'd cast about, took cages that it saw the Trappers toss and let the little Crabs and Lobsters out. It fooled with every Fish that floated by, it sprayed the Seagulls when they flew too near, it pooled in spots it KNEW the Sun liked dry and played with all the boats along the pier. It sueezed the baby Squid until they laughed then painted funny pictures with their ink and after it had taught them all this craft, it swirled away like water down a sink. It called to Clouds that hung around the sky and asked to meet them halfway in between then teased them until they began to cry but just to make it rain, not to be mean... The Tide adored its mischief and it would have gleefully continued on its spree but for the Moon, who for the greater good, came up at last and let it out to sea!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/3/2021 6:31:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Lycia. So glad to find it published in the 2020 PS Anthology.
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Date: 9/1/2015 1:39:00 AM
Wonderful write and a superb win! Big congrats Lycia!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 9/5/2015 4:57:00 AM
Thank you, Doc! How are you, my friend? Hope all is well with you. xoxo
Date: 8/13/2015 1:37:00 AM
Lycia, again... WOW, to see this one again, Congratulations on your win. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 8/13/2015 1:36:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Lycia! What an imagery!!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 8/13/2015 2:07:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Sharma. This is for a children's book, do you think the little kiddies will like it?
Date: 7/14/2015 2:18:00 AM
Lycia, Congrats on Carol's story, poem CONTEST. Always ~~ LINDA ~~
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/14/2015 4:30:00 AM
Thank you, PD! xoxo
Date: 7/14/2015 12:32:00 AM
LYCIA,, Congratulations on your awesome story win. Love SKAT
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/14/2015 4:29:00 AM
Thank you, dear SKAT! xoxo
Date: 7/11/2015 7:23:00 PM
Lycia, this write is charming and delightful, a wonderful story 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, winds of time
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Constance La France
Date: 7/12/2015 7:40:00 PM
I totally agree
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/11/2015 10:22:00 PM
Thank you, BW! I was saying earlier that I actually wrote this poem with a children's book in mind and am now working on the illustrations. I think the little kiddies will like it, what do you think? Hugzz!
Date: 7/10/2015 9:29:00 AM
Carol should love this, a very good story told in a lighthearted way, interesting personifications. A great entry all in all. May the force be with ya! hugs
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/10/2015 12:23:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. I've got some really positive feedback for a few of your pieces too, so keep checking your comments, okay? xoxo
Date: 7/9/2015 10:45:00 PM
A sweet and an intriguing piece excellent write friend,I enjoyed this as always...............7!..........AM
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/9/2015 11:55:00 PM
Hi AM - thank you so much! xoxo

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