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Forgotten Tide

The busy Moon forgot about the Tide.
She left it out all day upon the sand.
And when it found itself alone topside,
there mischief was immediately at hand

It washed the muddy Rocks until they shone,
then dragged in trash to mess them up again,
it chilled the chubby babies to the bone
and tugged their pudgy feet to pull them in

It rearranged the peaceful ocean floor
wrapped all the kelp into a tangled wreath,
then turned up all the driftwood on the shore
to tickle little creature underneath

It tricked the Fishermen it came across
by pulling at the lines they'd cast about,
took cages that it saw the Trappers toss
and let the little Crabs and Lobsters out

It called to Clouds that hung around the sky
then strained to meet them halfway in between
and splashed them until they began to cry
but just to make it rain, not to be mean!

It fooled with every Fish that floated by,
it sprayed the Seagulls when they flew too near,
it pooled in spots it KNEW the Sun liked dry
and played with all the boats along the pier 

It twirled the baby Squid until they laughed
then passed them each a sponge to blot the ink
and after they'd been taught this master craft,
it swirled away like water down a sink

The Tide adored its mischief and it would
have gleefully put more toward its spree
but for the Moon, who for the greater good,
rose none too soon and let it out to sea!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sietesantos Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 8:54 AM
Excellent write with awesome personification. What an enjoyable read! Congratulations on a fine win, my friend! Pandita
Harding Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 12:47 PM
Thank you, Pandita. I actually wrote this poem with a children's book in mind and am now working on the illustrations. I think the little kiddies will like it, what do you think? Hugzz!
A  Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 12:20 AM
Lycia, thank you for the support... SKAT
Harding Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 2:59 PM
Thank you SKAT, keep those awesome challenges comin'! xoxo
Nunez Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 9:13 AM
HI Lycia. This is so good. I can feel the impish glee of the Tide as it goes about with its mischief. Sweet flow and cadence too. A 7. Kim PS. Thank you for visit earlier.
Harding Avatar
June 26, 2015 at 7:25 PM
Hi kim, thank you so much for your positive input. You are appreciated!
Robertson Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 8:03 AM
The tide, such awesome power and graceful too. A Beautiful poem and beautifully put together.
Harding Avatar
June 26, 2015 at 7:24 PM
Thank you, Milton!
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