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Forgotten People

Forgotten people unnoticed daily with downcast faces that no one sees anyway Invisible people scurry to their houses unseen by many unseen by all actually Cellophane people hiding their hearts so no one else hurts them we see them not

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Date: 8/17/2020 8:56:00 PM
Shades of Beatles' 'Eleanor Rigby,' methinks. Tugs at the heart, Caren. Very meaningfully and eloquently penned. Thanks, Gershon
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/18/2020 2:56:00 PM
Thank you Gershon. I have become one.
Date: 8/17/2020 8:10:00 AM
Caren. This poem 'Forgotten People' a sad reality of people 'hiding their hearts'. To be sure they know how to feel pleasure & pain. How it feels to be on the losing end. Or just to be. -Richard
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/18/2020 2:56:00 PM
It is sadly more familiar to me now than it was ever before, now that I have aged, and have thus become "invisible".
Date: 8/16/2020 11:55:00 AM
Aye, many people WISH to be invisible! Aloha! Rico
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/16/2020 4:44:00 PM
And they do a GREAT job.
Date: 8/16/2020 11:14:00 AM
i think the world is made up of people like this, caren...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/16/2020 4:44:00 PM
It sure is.

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