Forgotten Memories

She sits by a dying hearth, an album open in her lap
The cold silent room startles like a slap
Mouldy images stare back from the past
Prints are all she has now
Memories that still cling
To the old Silverfish ravaged photographs
Like slips pegged to a line, flailing in a gale
One minute they’re there, the next they are only an apparition 
Burnt to a retina searching the void, of a memory long forgotten

Her finger now rests upon the “rising sun” of the AIF
Of her son’s slouch hat, to which casts a shadow
Across a face too young to shave
Only but a boy, learning how to behave
In a moment etched in time
Yet those moments before it
Remain immortalised within her precious album
And those that came after 
Lay buried in the Somme

He leans on a stool, one hand in his lap
The other supporting his shouldered rifle strap
His mouth blurred delivering a sentence
She closes her eyes, with thoughts of his independence
Sifting through the years of a boy in this room
Searching for his laugh through a cheeky grin
Probing for those silvery words etched in gelatine
Of a boy leaning on a stool, a conversation frozen
A mother’s memory of her son, reduced to yellowed images
A mother's loss between these pages

Shreds of the past fog the room
Pieces of a boy lay mute, 
Within her reach
Creases form on her brow, a tear escapes

The memory slips, it flaps uselessly from the line
And hangs by a thread
Then it’s gone…


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AIF = Australian Imperial Force (1914 – 1918)
Rising Sun = AIF Insignia


Isaiah Zerbst’s Poetry Contest – Pick a Title
23 Oct. 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/14/2014 3:56:00 PM
Can't imagine the pain of losing a child.. and hope I never find out. Heartfelt lines with empathy!! Congrats on your placement !!
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Date: 11/14/2014 2:10:00 PM
Mark...this is so poignant and beautiful. As a mother who has lost a son, you are very perceptive in these lines...just the things I do with pictures of Kenny. Well deserved won.
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Date: 11/14/2014 5:02:00 AM
wow Mark what an exquisite write devastation pours out ty for visiting my page and welcome to Soup congrats on win hugs
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Date: 11/2/2014 9:47:00 PM
I wonder how many memories would be forgotten about, if it were not for photographs? And, sadly, even those pictures cannot last forever.... This is a very moving write, and the tender emotion you've expressed can resonate deeply with all of us. Great work, Mark! Good luck in Isaiah's contest!
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