Forgotten Memories

Tonight the shore is pounded by the fretful, roiling surf, 
dark clouds tempestuously race across a yellow moon; 
the ocean's breast heaves a heaviness of bitter tears   
flinging gray shadowed sobs against silent, white-faced dunes    

Far across deep seated waters, another golden strand--
do you pace there the churning surf line as here I do;   
are these waves that beat against my blistered, sand burnt feet    
a desperate, longing message dispatched tonight from you?   

Somewhere harbor lights safely chart the well worn channel   
for anxious, weary sailors longing for the arms of home;    
but you and I, marooned, remain in lonely shadows    
forgotten memories between us, darkened pools of foam.

Copyright, October 22, 2014
Faye Lanham Gibson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/16/2014 2:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Faye. This is so beautiful. I love the sea.
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Date: 11/14/2014 6:39:00 PM
WOW!!!!! I find this to be a magnificent write Faye. It captures the loneliness of the sea and the pangs of apartness borne by the sailor and those left behind. Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 11/14/2014 3:41:00 PM
A wonderfully scripted poem of longing... exquisite !! Congrats on your win !!
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Date: 11/14/2014 2:38:00 PM
Faye, congratulations on 1st place for your beautiful but sad poem. Wonderful imagery. Sandra
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Date: 11/14/2014 9:56:00 AM
This is so lovely and sad,......well done Faye.....I'm so pleased to share this placement with you!
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Date: 11/14/2014 4:48:00 AM
Lovely pen Faye congrats on win hugs
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Date: 11/14/2014 2:48:00 AM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan
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Date: 11/13/2014 9:43:00 PM
Yeah Faye I was right, incredible write. Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 10/22/2014 4:11:00 PM
oooh, what great imagery, especially in that last stanza, the lonely shadows between them, the darkened pools of foam. GREAT job. I have to really get busy for these newer contests!!
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Date: 10/22/2014 3:12:00 PM
WOW, WOW, WOW, as long as I live I will never write poetry as beautiful as this. You are a talented poet. It was my privilige to read this. Thank You!
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Faye Gibson
Date: 10/22/2014 3:44:00 PM
Thank you, Maurice. First poem written at my new home, on the jetty in Fort Pierce.
Date: 10/22/2014 3:03:00 PM
I love the imagery and alliteration Faye a beautifully crafted poem. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xxx
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