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Forgotten Keys

I avoided keys of my car all night; stayed far away from markers and pens and bits of crayolas that are lost somewhere in the garage. I knew what my fingers would write if I let them, so by breaking them into razor-edged shapes, this overused table would remain antiseptic. Musings tried to creep without being so damn introspective; now my mind is full of smudged lines, broken sentences, and I hardly remember where on earth did my hands put all the other three keys to the doors, hallway, closets? Three Keys for John Lawless 5 July 2016

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Date: 7/23/2016 4:38:00 PM
like i said, "there is no box"... sweet congrats , manny.. no need to tutor you again!.. huggs
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Date: 7/23/2016 5:05:00 AM
Congrats Manny, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 7/22/2016 2:55:00 PM
Congrats well written great poem x
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Date: 7/21/2016 10:15:00 AM
Great write Manny! I must say this is one of your best! Congratulations and continue using the power of your words! :)
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Date: 7/20/2016 6:10:00 PM
Very 'outside the box', Manny, but I enjoyed your poem very much. Congrats on your placement on John's short list of winners! Sandra
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Date: 7/20/2016 1:59:00 PM
A sadly whimsical, question posing write. A very unique take on the three keys theme. thanks for participating in the contest.
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