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Ed and Winnie Etgen on wedding day

November 19, 1944

Liberal Army Airfield, Liberal Kansas

FORGOTTEN GARDENIA

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dry ink on yellowed license—November nineteenth~ their pressed gardenia still perfumes the cedar box where Mother enfolded time. eighty-one springs fade: the cake, the vows, their laughter— dust motes tremble as my thumb traces father’s smile bleeding through the license. no ghosts haunt these walls, only the scent of camphor and one stubborn thread~ Mother’s lace unraveling from the hem of forever.
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Gauthier Avatar
December 4, 2025 at 8:32 PM
Beautifully crafted poem ~ so sweet. Added to my FAVE's
Roper Avatar
November 20, 2025 at 9:13 AM
Memories kept in an old chest or box invites for longing cheerful and sad moments for those that are now gone. Loved reading
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 6:13 PM
thank you, kind Eve...appreciate your encouraging words, hugs, Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2025 at 3:38 AM
Wow! Really enjoyed this one. Not often, but occasionally will walk into my mom’s closet. Dad still keeps all mom’s things. I’ll finger the sweater that I grabbed for her, the final time she asked. Tears.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 6:12 PM
oh, your comments made me feel a tad teary eyed. I don't have any of mother's clothes, but I do have lots of her 'little' treasures, ones filled with memories of her.
Maverick Avatar
November 20, 2025 at 12:37 AM
Strong memories Sara, Thoughts stirred.'
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 6:11 PM
wow, thank you, Joe. Appreciate your visit and kind words
Goldsmith Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 9:48 AM
I enjoyed reading. Your wonderful "FORGOTTEN GARDENIA" write/story. Great Picture Here... Have a Blessed day writing away..........
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 6:11 PM
thanks, Paula, you're always so kind. appreciate you, hugs, Sara
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