Forgotten Field of Forever

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Written: April 14, 2024, For Silent One Forgotten Fields Contest Rumi Verse: “Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing, there is a field. I’ll meet you there. When the soul lies down in that grass, the world is too full to talk about.
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Forfeited field, forever felicity-free, Fight framed, flames floating far-flung. Fleeting focus, favored, albeit forgotten, Fathomless flotsam found floating. Upon the shore, whispers of eternal grace, We pledge to stick together no matter what. Recollection forever etched won't subside, As a quiet dove, I whisper vows of love across seas.  To view a planet as one speck of dust, An untamed flower encloses bliss. Embrace the eternity within your grasp, A sporadic instance, in everlasting clasp. My rain-soaked quartz dreamscape works, The hazy sky is adorned with stone scrapes. A canvas of plain faces, speckled in pale gray, They rest amidst the oak and ivy. My financial status must have been dire, April, however, brought spring too soon. On trees and shrubs, nesting birds croon, Untamed glory of nature was awe-in to boon. Time passage has drawn me gray, Yet faraway farms linger via mindsight. I discern the robin's song, vivid and clear, Whilst the sun rises through dawn veil. I retain awe-inspiring tales of nature, During May, hawthorn trees grow white. A chaffinch melody on a sycamore tree, Whispers of beauty dwell within my soul. Hedgerow birds moaned all day in June, Where flows evolve, male pheasants cuck. The swallows chase insects up high, The dipper sang along with the river's flow. Migrants cherish whispers of a beloved past, Across ancient fields, I wander, lost in reverie. Wildflowers adorning the natural green, Violets bloom in a dwarf, unpaved ditch. Scattered sway stumbled across swards, I stood solely smeared supra sundown. Stitched, stripped shards of September, Summer swing shed surely snatched.

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Date: 5/2/2024 11:54:00 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Great Ending... Have a fun day with your win...............
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Date: 5/1/2024 11:45:00 AM
Great alliteration and poetic lines in your take on the contest.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 4/18/2024 8:04:00 AM
"I stood solely smeared supra sundown. Stitched, stripped shards of September." Loved this line. Enjoyed the poem. "April, however, brought spring too soon." Over here April came with a lot of things. Aside it's pace to may, it sure has some baggages.
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Date: 4/14/2024 2:59:00 PM
Fathomless flotsam found floating… To view a planet as one speck of dust… During May, hawthorn trees grow white. A chaffinch melody on a sycamore tree…Love it, my friend! Have a wonderful evening!
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Date: 4/14/2024 2:11:00 PM
Dear Lassad: You have captured the essence of many a field ( if one had been fortunate enough to play in a field during childhood) Those are the times when engrossed in all the beauty of nature, you have captured, seem to last forever- then and now in memory. A poem to treasure. SuZ
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Date: 4/14/2024 12:59:00 PM
Your opening stanza is a symphony of alliteration, my friend. Words etched with your poetic prowess resonate throughout. And hear the essence of Rumi quote adorning the essence of your poem. Well done, as always, Lasaad.
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Date: 4/14/2024 12:46:00 PM
Ah dr sotto you have a creative way with words really, so many lines left me in awe , amazed by the way youv phrased thoughts and delivered it, in the most eloquent manner. I especially found it intriguing and very fitting for the prompt theme the lines “ Hedgerow birds moaned all day in June, Where flows evolve, male pheasants cuck. The swallows chase insects up high, The dipper sang along with the river's flow” brilliant diction and clever how youv made your lines flow so seamlessly! I love your use of poetic techniques and imagery painted in such an artistic manner! Pleasure reading this! Best wishes for the contest
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Date: 4/14/2024 12:31:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Sotto, great alliterations. A pleasure to read indeed… Beryl
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