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Forgotten Field of Forever

My dear sweetheart, let's take a walk and have a talk Whispering sweet murmurs of forevermore on that golden shore Pronouncing promises of staying together in every weather Reminiscing the memories we made they never will fade Declaring delicate vows of devotion across any ocean Vowing to value each other for a lifetime as two hearts singly chime Forgetting the world and its worthless worries throwing them to the breeze Spending special eternity with one another kissing away bother Losing our lives to love once again reviving ardour yen Crooning comfort in crepuscular crescendo under heaven's vast window Pledging utter passion that's perpetual soft avowals mutual Holding hands and joining souls in a world without end that's where our lives we'll spend

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Date: 5/1/2024 12:03:00 PM
Wonderful take on the contest. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 4/14/2024 11:19:00 AM
Love story- such joy. Love it so! God bless you with much love, Gina
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Date: 4/13/2024 9:01:00 PM
You have truly captured wonderfully, the joy of being in love-a love that is deep and will last forever. A beautiful poem, Joanna. :)
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Date: 4/13/2024 5:24:00 PM
such a delightful and beautifully written romance poem. Your alliterations tugged on my heart. I felt drawn to your poem for I long for time to spend quality, soulful time with my husband. I especially liked " Crooning comfort in crepuscular crescendo" How exquisite it is. enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 4/13/2024 2:02:00 PM
Seamless flow of alliterations and deeply moving and soulful write this is dear joanna! From the very first line, i was in awe of the way youv phrased your thoughts in such a captivating manner! Pleasure reading this. Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 4/13/2024 1:35:00 PM
Ahh!! We all desire those romantic times together when we can focus on that special person in our lives. Thanks for sharing your work with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 4/13/2024 10:45:00 AM
A romantic walk, Wonderful write Jo
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Date: 4/13/2024 5:33:00 AM
With its splendid alliteration and style of writing, this poem flows so beautifully. There is a soft prodding of romance too. Hugs.
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