Forgotten

Crimson rivers flow in baron lands,
Whilst money grows in another's hands.

Like scenes seen in a sepia age,
Sandstorms rage; Rust, dust & beige.

The air riddled with whistles,
Not of joy, but of ballistic missiles.

The decay of today fades,
Lost among the decay of an age.

Lands will be re-trodden,
And these natives re-forgotten.

Modern arms now litter the paths,
Along with modern legs, lungs & hearts.

Was this scene foreseen in the forefathers’ eyes?
Because this scene has just seen four fathers die.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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February 17, 2016 at 9:19 AM
Really tidy, great sentiment and punch!-line
Kiran Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 7:09 AM
The last two lines amplify the entire poem magnificently ...
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February 16, 2016 at 5:48 PM
Excellent. I'm glad you enjoyed it, Ravi. Jovial.
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February 16, 2016 at 6:49 AM
Heart feel poem, Jovial. The imagery is deep. Linda
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February 16, 2016 at 6:59 AM
Thank you, Linda. I was trying to harness a little descriptive writing.
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