Rebecca Larkin Poet Monorhyme

Forgotten

You said you had forgotten me
And you don't realize just how bad that can be

But you don't care and you never will care
I receive another crack, another tear

You will never understand just how much that hurt
throw me away, bury me in dirt

You told me I had been forgotten
And I feel so empty and rotten

Your words are torturous like acidic rain
Drowning me in never ending pain

I am nothing more than a stranger to you
And for me, that will just have to do

So goodbye, I shall bear this on my own
Driving down this bumpy road alone

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Richard Lamoureux September 6, 2014 at 9:03 AM How is it possible that such an amazing piece has so few comments? You are talented Becca.

Laura Breidenthal August 7, 2013 at 6:12 PM Ouch. . .how can that not hurt? Sometimes people just don't realize how they have hurt someone....but some do... and it's cruel. I feel your pain. I know this is an old write..but still. It stays with us. Always, Laura Laura Breidenthal August 7, 2013 at 6:13 PM My captcha said, ARTS... yes, art indeed Mr. Captcha! ~Laura

Jonas L. Rozario October 18, 2012 at 12:47 PM This is fantastic...I once wrote a poem quite similar to this one called Lesson Learned. But yours rhyme better and you have put more heart into it. Excellent job!!!