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piercing the dense fog lighthouse with lifesaving rays... defys elements new technologies embraced by modern sailors... old friend abandoned

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/22/2011 11:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Sidney's "Any New or old haiku Will do" contest Joyce. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 11/21/2011 10:10:00 AM

Quite a memorable set of verses Joyce... Great and lovely thoughts... Congrats on your worthy poem win. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/19/2011 9:16:00 PM

Congrats Joyce on HM for this stunning entry luv..

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/19/2011 7:14:00 AM

Hi Joyce..Where have all the wonderful lighthouses gone? ...love the theme...it was an unusual one of all the entries in the lighthouse haiku contest...I remember this one quite well. Great job ...and congrats again. Gwendolen

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/19/2011 7:02:00 AM

Congratulations on the win with this wonderful poem, Joyce

Skat A

Date: 11/19/2011 12:08:00 AM

J.J, Congrats in my contest~SID

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2011 10:07:00 PM

a very good one here too, Joyce, contrasting the old and new.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/9/2011 3:12:00 PM

Thank you for a most enjoyable read today Joyce. Hey the weekend is here now go enjoy yourself and keep that pen flowing with the new inspiration you will find along the way. That is what I have set in my mind to do. Love, Carol

Richard Pickett

Date: 9/9/2011 12:48:00 PM

So many old lighthouses abandoned...To bad...They are so beautiful..Nice write Joyce...God Bless....Taz

David Williams

Date: 9/9/2011 3:50:00 AM

hey Joyce, old friends is right..good luck..David