Bj Legros Kelley Poet Haiku

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                        +            Rusty  Ford  watches               +
                                  
                                  The highway of yesterday                         
                                                                                         
                                     Under star swept skies
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                                       'Bite Size Poem no7'

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Anna Marie Kaianah September 28, 2020 at 10:19 PM I like this poem. It's very good! I also love the art :) Bj Legros Kelley September 30, 2020 at 9:47 PM Thank you Anna, I had a lot of fun with the 'art' . I love old cars & old roads. The old roads are so nostalgic to me, especially through the abandoned towns. It's kind of sad. Yet the everlasting stars are watching over, and time goes on. Bj Legros Kelley September 29, 2020 at 8:42 PM Thank you <3 I appreciate your kind words!

Victor Buhagiar September 28, 2020 at 1:58 PM The stars are shining in this haiku. ~~ Bj Legros Kelley September 29, 2020 at 8:44 PM Thank you, I appreciate your encouragement to me.

Frances Schiavina September 28, 2020 at 6:51 AM Breathtaking in its originality. An old car watched by a starlit sky. Beautiful contrast. Well done! Bj Legros Kelley September 29, 2020 at 8:56 PM Thank you so much. I love old cars, and the old highways. I feel this one pretty deeply.

Sara Kendrick September 27, 2020 at 2:41 PM I like the creativity of this one. Enjoyed imagining seeing that ford sitting somewhere in a junkyard watching the sky. Thanks for all the visits. Sara Bj Legros Kelley September 29, 2020 at 9:38 PM Thank you Sara <3 I love visiting your page. You are an amazing poet. Did you see my Poetry Soup a Welcoming Group poem? It was your heart that I was speaking of. I love that poem, it is a phenomenal piece of art. This poem is my reflections of the old highways and cars we traveled when I was young. I have my dad's old rsty truck, hoping to restore it someday.

Mahtab Bangalee September 27, 2020 at 4:08 AM awesome........nice Bj Legros Kelley September 29, 2020 at 9:39 PM Thank you so much :-)

Harry Horsman September 26, 2020 at 11:23 PM But not forgotten? Your wonderful poetry reinstates it...Stay safe, Betty Jo. Bj Legros Kelley September 27, 2020 at 1:04 AM Thank you, your kind words mean a lot to me. No, you're right, not forgotten, not to many of us. I hold the memories of the old roads close to my heart.