Forgivingest

Hark the neverstill story of all things great and small! And then the everwhilst glory told 'n conjured to us all. Heaped in mankind's sins through the sages for the ages the angel's rescue then begins for centuries the battle rages. Priests 'n poets, writers tell the wisdoms that fall on pages secrets not learned so well the brave fight for courageous. The simplest words that ring true do evade our glance and gaze it's what we always knew that wins forever praise. In one moment that we live for all our foes we've found if we just once could forgive eternal peace is ours profound.

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/20/2022 8:25:00 AM

"The simplest words that ring true do evade our glance and gaze" - Great truth. Congratulations!

Greg Gaul
Date: 7/22/2022 6:20:00 AM

Your comment and insight is most appreciated.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/20/2022 1:02:00 AM

Beautifully written, Greg! My view on forgiveness is different but I do recognise what you’ve said as a great self-healing tool, as long as we are centred in lower mind. Congrats on your win!

Greg Gaul
Date: 7/22/2022 6:21:00 AM

Your opinions and thoughts are most welcome. Prompts for future verses. Thank you so much.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/18/2022 8:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write. I love your line, "if we just once could forgive." I forgive and then let God handle it. Have a blessed day.......................

Greg Gaul
Date: 7/22/2022 6:22:00 AM

Bless you Paula.

P.M. Richter

Date: 4/13/2020 8:47:00 AM

A great message Greg ~ congratulations on your win!

Greg Gaul
Date: 4/13/2020 9:25:00 AM

Thanks so much. I know from your writing that mindfulness is no stranger. My teacher once said forgiveness is the most important thing in the universe.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/29/2019 4:40:00 PM

If people could only understand that forgiveness helps them the most! If you think about it that way it is not so hard to forgive when it is helping yourself. The message in your poem shines brightly and beautifully Greg. Bravo! : ) xxoo

Greg Gaul
Date: 4/29/2019 5:46:00 PM

Looking at your bio Connie, I see the Eastern thought influence. It shows in your work also. My Buddhist teacher said that forgiveness is the most powerful thing in the universe. Thanks for your comment and I appreciate your kindness.