Forgiveness

Forgiveness 

From before time began
Few knew the great power
Found in this act of grace.
Freedom from the guilt we
Feel when we offend a
Friend empowers us to
Find eternities call.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 3:14 AM
- Congratulations on your great wins poems, Jack - Lovely written - I do not participate often in contest, but this I like very much - A challenge like a puzzle .... not easy ... but Pleiades poems is a wonderful form - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 5:24 PM
Beautifully penned Jack many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Eldridge Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 6:28 PM
Thank you for the encouraging words.
Merryman Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 4:51 PM
Jack, I like your thoughts on forgiveness and your Pleiades was well written, with flowing lines. Congrats on your 3rd place win! Love, Kim
Eldridge Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 6:29 PM
Thank you Kim. It truly is the most powerful creative tool.
Krampe Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 4:39 PM
Very nice flow and great message. Congrats on your placement, Jack. Agnes
Eldridge Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 6:31 PM
Thank you JE
Andresen Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 4:44 AM
- Great written, Jack - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a lovely Sunday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Eldridge Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 5:07 AM
Thank you for sharing some Sunshine with me! Thanks for reading
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