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... Depression, Bipolar Depression Quotes, Pain, Commitment Suicide Quotes

"Forgiveness heals an open wound, the spirit repairs the soul" As the red sun sets so did she Taking her life far away Did she even consider me Lord, I do forgive her this day Inspired by Rick Parise's Contest One Original Quote Plus Four Line Poem Written: September 07, 2016

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Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2016 5:05:00 PM

I have a lump in my throat reading your lines Sara - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 9/21/2016 8:27:00 AM

I FEEL YOUR PAIN sweet Sara...so sorry you feel this way. Sometimes I feel the survivors of suicide feel more pain than the actual victim...just my feeling...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/20/2016 9:33:00 AM

This is so sad. Congratulations on the win, forgiveness is a path well chosen.

Skat A

Date: 9/19/2016 10:22:00 PM

Sara, a very intense write, I was moved, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "ROSES STINK." Celebrate with me. **SKAT**

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/20/2016 6:19:00 AM

Skat, Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..I will stop by later..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2016 9:23:00 PM

Yes, I am like Carolyn wondering if the quote above the poem is yours . it truly is profound, Sara. Lovely little poem to go with it.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/16/2016 10:15:00 AM

Andrea, As far as I know the quote is mine but it could be from internalizing so many things from scripture, religious literature, and other people's work..I guess since you two haven't ever heard it before I could post it as my original quote..I did not copy it directly from anywhere..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/14/2016 2:19:00 PM

Sara, I've been thinking about forgiveness a lot recently. It truly is the best way to heal wounds. Is the quote yours? How profound! The poem is both moving and compelling. Very nice.

Jesse Day

Date: 9/13/2016 11:12:00 PM

Nicely arranged piece - love the one-liner combined with the four lines. Beautifully written.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/13/2016 7:14:00 PM

A 7 for this very moving poem, Sara--Janice

John Hardison

Date: 9/10/2016 10:38:00 PM

Those who want to take their own life have often been badly hurt by life. Feel suicide their only escape. Sad!!! Best let God be the judge. Peace Love and Joy

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/7/2016 10:55:00 PM

Suicide is always misunderstood. Most people who commit suicide don't think of others because they don't feel like anyone will miss them. They are alone in life even when surrounded by family and friends. It;s hard to forgive what we don't understand. Great write on a very sad subject, Mrs Sara.