Sara Chansarkar Poet Senryu

Forgiveness

I believe again
My heart mends so easily
When you say sorry

I try yet again
To live the vows together
That is who I am

I forgive again
Because I love you more than
The hurt you cause me

Written on 08/19/2016
Contest: Forgiveness by Laura Loo

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Connie Marcum Wong August 22, 2016 at 2:19 AM Excellent Sara...this is a first place win for me! 7 ; )

Kai Michael Neumann August 22, 2016 at 2:16 AM Strong love, hey. I like your message of forgiveness. Congratulations, Kai.

Sandra Haight August 21, 2016 at 4:52 PM Sara, this is a very inspiring 'forgiveness' Senryu. Congratulations on your 2nd Place win. Hugs, Sandra

James Inman August 21, 2016 at 12:24 PM Forgiveness is wonderful but forgiving does not mean having to accept being continually used. To say your sorry is hollow without change.

Beautiful Scars August 21, 2016 at 10:37 AM Sara...my fave line is "Because I love you more than the hurt you cause me"...beautiful dear lady...congrats on your placement and thank you very much for being a part of myc contest :)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich August 20, 2016 at 6:47 PM very nice. I like someone telling a personal story through this challenge

Charlie Smith August 19, 2016 at 12:41 PM Lovely entry Sara, bet wishes in the contest...

Anne-Lise Andresen August 19, 2016 at 8:37 AM - A lovely and sweet forgiveness poem, Sara - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)