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Forgiveness

I believe again
My heart mends so easily
When you say sorry

I try yet again
To live the vows together
That is who I am

I forgive again
Because I love you more than
The hurt you cause me

Written on 08/19/2016
Contest: Forgiveness by Laura Loo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/22/2016 4:41:00 AM
A lovely write, Sara. I love the last stanza - a beautiful message of forgiveness. Congratulations on your 2nd place win in the contest. T.J
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Date: 8/22/2016 2:19:00 AM
Excellent Sara...this is a first place win for me! 7 ; )
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Date: 8/22/2016 2:16:00 AM
Strong love, hey. I like your message of forgiveness. Congratulations, Kai.
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Date: 8/21/2016 4:52:00 PM
Sara, this is a very inspiring 'forgiveness' Senryu. Congratulations on your 2nd Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/21/2016 12:24:00 PM
Forgiveness is wonderful but forgiving does not mean having to accept being continually used. To say your sorry is hollow without change.
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Date: 8/21/2016 10:37:00 AM
Sara...my fave line is "Because I love you more than the hurt you cause me"...beautiful dear lady...congrats on your placement and thank you very much for being a part of myc contest :)-luloo
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Date: 8/20/2016 6:47:00 PM
very nice. I like someone telling a personal story through this challenge
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Date: 8/19/2016 12:41:00 PM
Lovely entry Sara, bet wishes in the contest...
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Date: 8/19/2016 8:37:00 AM
- A lovely and sweet forgiveness poem, Sara - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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