Forgiveness

Who are we – mere mortals that we cannot forgive?
Just make it a practice to live and let live.

Hanging onto bitterness or hate brings no relief.
Instead it brings you simply more misery and grief.

Resentments are huge sores that can fester deep inside.
It’s easier to let them go – just swallow stupid pride.

That pride or stubborness which keeps your anger going -
picture it as a tumor that keeps growing and growing.

Release it; let go of all that negativity.
Make room inside yourself for happy energy.

Forgiveness does not mean you have to make a foe your friend.
The person you forgive might stay awful to the end.

But you, my friend, have got to free hard feelings from your soul.
Your spirit then can heal; your heart with love can then be full.


For the Forgiveness Poetry Contest of Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Goldsmith Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 9:36 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a "Powerful" write. Many will not forgive, does it give them power??? Love your ending. I say, let God handle it. Have a great/blessed day.......................
Flood Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 4:48 PM
I’ll second that. A profound, undeniable truth in every line. There are a few ‘devout’ folk I’ve met that could learn a lot from your words, Andrea. A well deserved win. Terry
Ibeh Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 4:13 AM
Superb penning, Andrea:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win!
Balasubramanian Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 10:40 PM
This is awesome. Write. Many profound truths told in most simple way. Superb! Inspirational. Congratulations on your well deserved win. A fave!
Balasubramanian Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 10:38 PM
This is awesome. Write. Many profound truths told in most simple way. Superb! Congratulations on your well deserved win.
Evans Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 7:25 PM
Congratulations. Freeing yourself from anger, from grudges and letting in forgiveness, kindness, understanding are good for your heart and for your health.
Canerdy Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 10:51 AM
A big CONGRATS on your win, Andrea! Janice
Canerdy Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 10:51 AM
A big CONGRATS on your win, Andrea! Janice
Kauffman Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 9:42 AM
Love the parallelism Andrea. Congratulations on your win with this poem of wisdom. Blessings!
Inman Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 9:33 AM
Lovely sentiments Andrea.
Milgate Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 12:33 AM
Great poem, honest and rhymed Impressive!!! as usual!!!
Y. Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 9:15 PM
Hi Andrea, I'm just coming to say congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a good evening:-) Alexis
Seeker Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 8:42 PM
The simplicity with which you have stated this deep truth is remarkable, Andrea! We all draw inspiration from your words, shining like a beacon of spiritual light! Congrats on your win, thank you for sharing these insights with us all.
Theraven Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 2:32 PM
Andrea, Love your reflections on forgiveness. If some see it as a weakess, it's one that's long past due. Though to forgive and forget, hardest two things one ever knew. -Richard
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 3:44 PM
thanks, Richard. I am the type who does not hold a grudge, so this is one of the easier commandments for me, but I sometimes wonder how I'd feel if someone murdered a love one of mine. I hear of people who actually go the prison and forgive the killers. I think most people would not be able to go that far with forgiveness.
Hankins Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 9:23 AM
Such truth to your words. Thanks for this message at this time, Andrea, because I needed it. Your couplets are full of forgiving energy. Loved it! Needed it!
Y. Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 8:02 AM
WoW! Andrea, I totally agree with everything you said in your poem—stellar advice on forgiveness. The part where you said, “ Forgiveness does not mean you have to make a foe your friend,” resonated so well with me. Best wishes in the contest. How are you? I hope you are my friend. Have a nice day and weekend:-) Alexis
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 6:06 AM
Beautifully composed message in a freely flowing verse. Forgiveness is a fervent faculty.
Poet Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 5:20 AM
Wise wording and serene sentiments that we should relate to. My best hopes for a great win. Have a great weekend, Andrea
Pandit Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 4:24 AM
Serene sentiments you express, Andrea. Great advice.
Cunningham Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 2:35 AM
Very good advice, bottling it up causes bitterness and anxiety within. Good luck Tom
Jayasankar Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 12:35 AM
So meaningful Andrea... How true isn't it.. that our pride, stubbornness or anger would keep growing and growing like a tumor... wise words my sweet friend... Best wishes and hugs... ~ Ani
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