Forgiveness

Forgiveness is the exorcism of a coddled demon named Grudge.



5.14.2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Mcguire Avatar
June 9, 2020 at 3:29 PM
Very touching PS, I struggle fiercely with forgiveness having been hurt by a close family member. I say forgiveness words but it doesn't feel right. But its getting better and I think Im almost there.
Awtry Avatar
June 9, 2020 at 3:44 PM
it is difficult, isn't it... I think we all struggle with forgiveness .
Foster Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 2:22 PM
OMG, I love this one. Ann
Awtry Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 2:31 PM
Thank you Ann :) ~ps
Mcguire Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 9:44 PM
Hit home for me, a FAV, I struggle with forgivness.
Awtry Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 10:08 AM
Oh, thank you for the FAV! I too struggle with forgiveness... Grudge and I are well acquainted. :) ~ps
Vangaveti Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 12:01 AM
Very true and a brilliant write :)
Awtry Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 12:47 AM
Thank you very much :)
Ashley Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 9:21 PM
Profound beauty is found in the brevity of your brilliant poem, P.S. A fav! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Awtry Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 11:06 PM
Thank you Susan for your generous words on this little poem. The FaV is an honor and much appreciated :) ~ps
Wolf Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 8:05 PM
Whew...A lot to absorb in one line. A two thumbs up monoku, for sure. :) gw
Awtry Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 8:26 PM
Two thumbs up! Thank you! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 3:31 PM
For sure! Grudge has a brother named Bitter.
Awtry Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 3:35 PM
Oh Kim! that is good! :)
Pandit Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 2:27 PM
Deep and meaningful..so well said, PSA.
Awtry Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 3:13 PM
Thank you dear Vijay :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 1:10 PM
Oh that's good. !.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 2:24 PM
Thank you! :)
Awtry Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 1:20 PM
And you have made my day :) and a Happy Birthday to you!!!!
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