Forgiveness

I begged For forgiveness, And God in turn Added years of peace and joy; To a life that before, Had no purpose.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Stiles-Culver Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 12:01 AM
this one is sweet, simple, and inspiring
Stiles-Culver Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 12:01 AM
:) this one is sweet, simple, and inspiring
Stiles-Culver Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow thats amazing! i hope to be able to write free verse that well someday! very deep emotions, i has hooked from the first word to the last syllable. very good portrayal of emotion
Hero Aka Hero-Wilson Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 11:19 AM
CONGRATS ON BEING FEATURED THIS WEEK! THIS IS A VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM, NICELY WRITTEN. RHONDA HERO
Brown Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 6:28 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Tom. It is an honor to be on the list with you this week. May you find the inspiration to keep you writing. Love, Carol
Plotczyk Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 12:05 PM
Nicely written. Happy ending. Congrats!
Neels Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 5:51 AM
A stunning write with an awesome message Tom, congratulations on your poem being featured this week :)
Mehta Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 9:18 AM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Tom
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