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Forgiven 21

A conscience; telling me to walk not;
But, temptation over powered.
Not listening to my mind,
sin took its course again.
Father, "FORGIVE me,
for this is the 
twenty-first
time with
her."


Pace, G
04-25-2012

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Danielle Dixon Date: 3/13/2014 1:45:00 PM Nice. Makes me want to hear the rest of the story. Login to Reply

Debbie Duncan Date: 10/18/2013 12:51:00 AM nicely done ;} Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/8/2012 9:55:00 PM if it sounds like fun, why don't you join,,, what????? you can't produce a nice wet kissing poem for my contest.... never mind you don't seem like the challenging kind of man... you only write for you,,,,,xox~ pd Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/18/2012 9:46:00 PM Lmao!!

Doreen Wright Date: 7/30/2012 3:24:00 PM Alright now...no 22nd time lol!! JK! I enjoyed your nonet!! I can dig it! Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/18/2012 9:45:00 PM Doreen, thank you!!! Lmao!!

Jennifer Spase Date: 7/18/2012 6:07:00 AM A powerful habit to break is the intense connection with the wrong person. You opened my eyes with a good laugh. Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/18/2012 9:43:00 PM Lol..thanks Jennifer!! :)

Diane Christian Date: 6/4/2012 6:21:00 AM aww lovley verse, I know the bible says we should forgive not 77 times but 77 times 7 and ekep multiplying it, wellw ritten and thanks for your kind comments. God bless you from diane Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 6/4/2012 7:14:00 AM Thank you so kindly Diane!!! Love your comment!!

Carma Sanderson Date: 6/1/2012 11:55:00 PM love the passion in your pen, amongst all else.... Carma Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 6/2/2012 12:30:00 AM Thank you as I love your passion in your work as well Carma!!

Bl Devnath Date: 5/6/2012 10:23:00 AM Prayer is only way to recover, nice truth, Loved always, bl Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 6/2/2012 12:30:00 AM Sir..sorry!! Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/6/2012 9:42:00 PM Thank you madam always!!!

Amy Green Date: 5/6/2012 8:28:00 AM Standing ovation! Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/6/2012 8:49:00 AM Thank you maam for stopping by!

Gianna Swayne Date: 5/3/2012 9:40:00 PM LOL! U know this was great... I really enjoy ur work. I got a good smile from this one.. I really liked it's form as well. Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/4/2012 4:17:00 AM Lol...yeah trying to be different..all smiles

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/1/2012 6:04:00 PM Got a chuckle..Sara Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/1/2012 10:04:00 PM Lol...cute

Nancy Jones Date: 4/26/2012 5:37:00 PM Well, at least you're counting... Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 4/30/2012 9:36:00 AM Lol!! I just needed a two syllable number so I used twenty-one..lol Only to make a point that no matter how many times you fall its not too late to get back up.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/26/2012 3:03:00 PM I enjoyed this nonet. Hmmm, maybe it's time for an engagement ring!!! (from my christian point of view, I think you really like her a lot!) Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 4/26/2012 3:16:00 PM Lol..I can't even reply to your comment from falling on the floor laughing. I was just trying to speak the mind of other guys who may have felt like this once before. I'm not ready for marrage just yet. smiles..hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/26/2012 1:04:00 PM Good my friend,( dont miss my last one too).Smile !!!! - oxox Anne-Lise Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 4/26/2012 3:13:00 PM I won't sweetheart!!! Thank you for stopping by. hugs smile

Ronny Madonsela Date: 4/26/2012 10:44:00 AM a suspense at the end i like. Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 4/26/2012 12:26:00 PM Thank you for stopping by and sharing!!

Deborah Burch Date: 4/25/2012 9:00:00 PM LOL...how do you keep up with the "pace" G ;) Cool write...yeah, I got to agree with the title, though...after 21x...lol clever...big hugs, hun, love deb Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 4/26/2012 2:38:00 AM Lol...too funny!!! Hugs and love...thank you for sharing with me.

Joseph May Date: 4/25/2012 6:39:00 PM very nice nonet G...thanks for sharing Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 4/26/2012 2:36:00 AM Thank you sir..a pleasure seeing you!!