Pace Ink-U-Script Poet Nonet

Forgiven 21

A conscience; telling me to walk not;
But, temptation over powered.
Not listening to my mind,
sin took its course again.
Father, "FORGIVE me,
for this is the 
twenty-first
time with
her."


Pace, G
04-25-2012

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Danielle Dixon March 13, 2014 at 1:45 PM Nice. Makes me want to hear the rest of the story.

Debbie Duncan October 18, 2013 at 12:51 AM nicely done ;}

Poet Destroyer A August 8, 2012 at 9:55 PM if it sounds like fun, why don't you join,,, what????? you can't produce a nice wet kissing poem for my contest.... never mind you don't seem like the challenging kind of man... you only write for you,,,,,xox~ pd Pace Ink-U-Script August 18, 2012 at 9:46 PM Lmao!!

Doreen Wright July 30, 2012 at 3:24 PM Alright now...no 22nd time lol!! JK! I enjoyed your nonet!! I can dig it! Pace Ink-U-Script August 18, 2012 at 9:45 PM Doreen, thank you!!! Lmao!!

Jennifer Spase July 18, 2012 at 6:07 AM A powerful habit to break is the intense connection with the wrong person. You opened my eyes with a good laugh. Pace Ink-U-Script August 18, 2012 at 9:43 PM Lol..thanks Jennifer!! :)

Diane Christian June 4, 2012 at 6:21 AM aww lovley verse, I know the bible says we should forgive not 77 times but 77 times 7 and ekep multiplying it, wellw ritten and thanks for your kind comments. God bless you from diane Pace Ink-U-Script June 4, 2012 at 7:14 AM Thank you so kindly Diane!!! Love your comment!!

Carma Sanderson June 1, 2012 at 11:55 PM love the passion in your pen, amongst all else.... Carma Pace Ink-U-Script June 2, 2012 at 12:30 AM Thank you as I love your passion in your work as well Carma!!

Bl Devnath May 6, 2012 at 10:23 AM Prayer is only way to recover, nice truth, Loved always, bl Pace Ink-U-Script June 2, 2012 at 12:30 AM Sir..sorry!! Pace Ink-U-Script May 6, 2012 at 9:42 PM Thank you madam always!!!

Amy Green May 6, 2012 at 8:28 AM Standing ovation! Pace Ink-U-Script May 6, 2012 at 8:49 AM Thank you maam for stopping by!

Gianna Swayne May 3, 2012 at 9:40 PM LOL! U know this was great... I really enjoy ur work. I got a good smile from this one.. I really liked it's form as well. Pace Ink-U-Script May 4, 2012 at 4:17 AM Lol...yeah trying to be different..all smiles

Sara Kendrick May 1, 2012 at 6:04 PM Got a chuckle..Sara Pace Ink-U-Script May 1, 2012 at 10:04 PM Lol...cute

Nancy Jones April 26, 2012 at 5:37 PM Well, at least you're counting... Pace Ink-U-Script April 30, 2012 at 9:36 AM Lol!! I just needed a two syllable number so I used twenty-one..lol Only to make a point that no matter how many times you fall its not too late to get back up.

Andrea Dietrich April 26, 2012 at 3:03 PM I enjoyed this nonet. Hmmm, maybe it's time for an engagement ring!!! (from my christian point of view, I think you really like her a lot!) Pace Ink-U-Script April 26, 2012 at 3:16 PM Lol..I can't even reply to your comment from falling on the floor laughing. I was just trying to speak the mind of other guys who may have felt like this once before. I'm not ready for marrage just yet. smiles..hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2012 at 1:04 PM Good my friend,( dont miss my last one too).Smile !!!! - oxox Anne-Lise Pace Ink-U-Script April 26, 2012 at 3:13 PM I won't sweetheart!!! Thank you for stopping by. hugs smile

Ronny Madonsela April 26, 2012 at 10:44 AM a suspense at the end i like. Pace Ink-U-Script April 26, 2012 at 12:26 PM Thank you for stopping by and sharing!!

Deborah Burch April 25, 2012 at 9:00 PM LOL...how do you keep up with the "pace" G ;) Cool write...yeah, I got to agree with the title, though...after 21x...lol clever...big hugs, hun, love deb Pace Ink-U-Script April 26, 2012 at 2:38 AM Lol...too funny!!! Hugs and love...thank you for sharing with me.

Joseph May April 25, 2012 at 6:39 PM very nice nonet G...thanks for sharing Pace Ink-U-Script April 26, 2012 at 2:36 AM Thank you sir..a pleasure seeing you!!