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Forgive My Misgivings

What is forgiveness, good question if anything at all Forgives the adulterer, but did she make the right call Some crimes so egregious, there’s no second chance Unless we bury our heads, and go around in a trance Only the injured party, has the power to truly forgive Poured acid on my face, but at least then let me live I mean come on, some fates even worse than death Torturers, psychopaths, should we forgive and forget, This is not hatred in my heart, it’s just common sense How do we believe our perpetrators, actually repent Prisoners tell the parole board sorry, to get out of jail Some speak the truth, but others are incorrigible fails I’m sorry I done wrong, took your car while you slept It’s ok son your forgiven, left my keys around, so inept On second thoughts, condoning may encourage it again Only the next time, they run someone over, what then Not so straight forward, when I put it to you this way Forgiveness has consequences, makes hurt seem ok Indeed in some cases, offence should be overlooked Where a circumstance dictated, unbecoming conduct Perhaps the culprit was young, just went off the rails, Forgive by all means, with some cautionary harsh tale But what is forgiveness, perhaps just simply letting go Showing your the bigger person, also good for the ego Is forgiveness a human delusion, to just give permission It’s our Christian way, but did anyone tell the inquisition If there is an almighty God, or indeed some higher power Will they overlook our not forgiving, come the final hour To die with a resentment, does it mean an incomplete life Wait til on ones deathbed, condemn your unfaithful wife To die of some disease, contracted doing charitable work Sorry! my own choice, I forgive myself for what it’s worth FORGIVENESS Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker 24/5/2021

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Date: 3/5/2022 4:45:00 PM
- Forgive the much belated message, David! - Persuing your expression is guaranteed engrossing and provocative. - Prime egasample here of of your bold summations relating to regularly occuring and significant misdemeanors. - Extra credit for the context of your profound submission, for giving the concept breadth.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/6/2022 4:10:00 AM
Heya Sigrid, so delighted to hear from you, I was indeed trying to give breadth to the forgiveness phenomena, of trying to forgive for forgiveness sake, or perhaps just to appease ones own conscience, I really don’t believe it’s incumbent to forgive, perhaps sometimes better to forget, and try move on with our lives, cheers David
Date: 5/24/2021 1:01:00 PM
Extraordinary subject, and unfathomable word choice, in a musical plan streaming directly to the heart, without a doubt on the off chance that we excuse each bad behavior life will resemble a zoo, I accept internal pardoning ought to be done between the two gatherings after the law occurred and whoever made the shortcoming had been arraigned. Have a great day my friend
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David Kavanagh
Date: 5/24/2021 1:25:00 PM
Thank you Lasaad, this really is an extraordinary subject for a contest, really pits religious instruction versus common sense, I think the seeker likes to push all our buttons, and I’ve no problem with that, I agree intervention between the parties, can resolve some grievances, but the law must decide for societies sake the punishment, even if the person is forgiven by the aggrieved beforehand, cheers David

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