Bri Brown Poet Rhyme

Forgive Me

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for Bree is mad at me and I'm trying to show
that i do love so very much of her.
this i hopefully, the love of her life. Alec.
thank you







please, Bree
forgive me
can't you see..?
that i love thee?

For i made a wrong choice,
of using my own voice,
and saying things i should not have said.
for i was drunk
worse than an a punk, you called me.

I know your hurt,

over what i announced,
but  let me assure you,
i do dread,
the things i said,
when my head was in a tizzy,
with the stuff that makes me dizzy
you're my busy, busy bee,
taking every part of me
you're my glee
forgive me,
please.

-  love tenderly Alec

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Logan Saucillo November 20, 2009 at 1:24 PM in regards to the i was drunk line, a drunk man's words are a sober man's thoughts. don't blame the drunkeness! you may feel sorry for what you have done, but the words you've said can't be replaced. you can forgive bree, but never forget.

Michaela Dowdy November 20, 2009 at 11:03 AM hey lol. i'm in snively's. where are you?

Michaela Dowdy November 20, 2009 at 10:41 AM i second bree's comment! though it is a good write

Bri Brown November 20, 2009 at 9:52 AM alec. why use my freekin accout behind my back.make your own. and what you said did hurt... i dont want to forgive you alec. you hurt me once and youll do it again