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Forging ahead, means so much to so many folks for myself this means multi-planetary inhabitation... this is a great undertaken cause many think it's a hoax, Space X doesn't think so, nor I, as a matter of fact... we need to hurry, hurry on up there, establish human, existence, not to perish like dyno's did, stay focus on that, why now, well we can, need to provide all people a living... "one universal work force for humanity to survive", think what this will accomplish, ramifications' stayin' alive doom also gloom can happen any day, every day we do not... launch our spaceships, set up infer-structure to these means like turning our head, when passing homeless, also 'r' astronaut's

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Date: 10/3/2023 8:05:00 AM
Dear Perry, your poem is expressively rich and thought-provoking. The urgency of this piece is keenly felt through the potent imagery of your verse. Your last line is impactful for a striking finale. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Perry Campanella
Date: 10/17/2023 9:23:00 AM
Thank You Susan Ashley - for your review and kind comment of my little poem - Bless You - Stay Safe Too!

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