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forget me not there must be a reason to hold on to a flower of such rare beauty 

so i look at two sides from flower to words a coin spinning a mixed bag of feelings

i wrote it in unrhymed couplets meaning two sides to every tango 

Forgetmenot

In sweet summer aroma these eyes burn hungry 
as feelings fall down from the branches baptised beautiful 

Forget not me in every waking dream memory 
crowning each and every smile come true precious 

Seduced where darkness held the eyes content 
blinded in love wings clipped fallen grace kneels 

As blue skies mirrored through eclipsed reflections 
when the wheel of our time stood still lost in a dark space past

Cut from the light suffering dead of misfortune 
night whispering horrors soft velvet guinness chills crawl 

Through the heart coldly spineless creatures murmur 
warmly where the fire burns hiding in the ashes truth prevails 

Its here you touched me with deeply chains bound angel in wings 
so lost inside holding onto a distant dream beginning twilight hours 

There is no sun in the shadow of an enchantress queen 
sorceress of spells cast under to bring down love oathbreaker of destiny
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Petersen Potter Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 10:36 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Smith Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 10:14 AM
So passionate Liam...some great lines especially "As blue skies mirrored through eclipsed reflections when the wheel of our time stood still lost in a dark space past" a perfect tango and a fave
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