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Forgetful

Without paper and pen
Thoughts through my head
Like raindrops falling
Never to be seen again


Written 10/13/2015
Contest: 10 lines or less
Sponsor: Rob Carmack

Copyright © Greg Hoffman | Year Posted 2015

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October 16, 2015 at 9:37 PM

Greg, Congratulations on your win. -SKAT-

Andrea Dietrich

October 16, 2015 at 7:54 PM

hey, I see it has a win as well. Back here to say Congratulations.

October 16, 2015 at 8:04 PM

Well thank you very much for stopping by again. You made my day yesterday with the wonderful comment, coming from you that means a lot to me

Andrea Dietrich

October 15, 2015 at 4:13 PM

this is wonderful!!

October 15, 2015 at 11:16 AM

The words are easy to relate to and the story is all too familiar. A poem offering quiet reflection on the essence of being a poet. Emile.

October 15, 2015 at 9:37 AM

Very Clever Greg.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

October 15, 2015 at 2:10 AM

Congrats on superb win Greg with this wonderful write!

October 14, 2015 at 8:41 PM

Congrats on your win with this poem. I keep paper and pen handy at all times.

October 14, 2015 at 4:29 AM

I so relate to this, I need to have a pad in the car with me I think. Good luck in the contest

October 14, 2015 at 8:01 PM

Thanks for stopping by and commenting. I have one in my car and it helps but can be a little dangerous at times

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