William Burke Poet Rhyme

FORGED IN FIRE

Chapter one – forged in fire                                    
                                          forged in fire
You’ve been alone too long, just looking for a prince.                                                           Now that you’ve found him, you haven’t been the same since.                                   You love him so much that it really hurts.                                                                          When you’re out on the town with another he flirts.                                                        He makes you so mad you could just scream and shout.                                                       That is if you know what I’m talking about. Because...
Hard times are forged in fire.                                                                                                            True love is fueled by desire.                                                                                                           It’s only when you’re down and out                                                                                             that you really know what I’m talking about.

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Ava Springs November 6, 2025 at 8:54 PM HI, Lovely poem, it seems to me that you have something to say, though I'm not sure I follow your thoughts - something about between hard times and love being fuelled... And for me the spaces are too long and I get lost amongst the lines. The capitals too are not necessary.