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Forge Ahead Shrugging

I write upon our history, pen smeared in blood Human legacy, wars enduring shame Brushed aside indelible ink Readily forgotten The pregnancy pain, bonny baby took away Scar tissue, for the time being hidden Behind basic instinct, survival is driven Truth brings denial, all set for replay Hollowed out, our core is rotten Feigning amnesia stinks Unholy absolution, washes away blame Absence of conscience, shrugging off wet mud Erosion of remorse, tames great biblical floods Waters have receded, but stains remain Edges collapse, into the brink Crumbling apart, sodden Grasping at fading roots, crucified in loose clay Divided we forge ahead, unbidden My Invented Form I Write Upon Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France 28/01/2021 Syllable counted P/S. 12/10/8/6/12/10. per stanza

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Date: 2/16/2021 7:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Love your first line, "I write upon our history, pen smeared in blood." We should learn from history but we do not. Enjoy your win with blessings.........................
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/16/2021 8:25:00 AM
Heya Paula, thank you so much for congratulations, indeed we have short memories, where war is concerned, history forever repeating itself, cheers David
Date: 2/15/2021 10:20:00 AM
Hi David, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/15/2021 10:56:00 AM
Thank you so much Alexis for looking in, with congratulations, tough contest, delighted with the placement, cheers David
Date: 2/15/2021 9:21:00 AM
David, congratulations on your win in my contest, I Write Upon, using my Invented Form, your poem is wonderful _Constance
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/15/2021 10:55:00 AM
Thank you Constance, was a great contest, I’m delighted with your placement, certainly a tough form you invented, but looks great when it works out for you, cheers David
Date: 1/28/2021 2:23:00 PM
nicely written....leaders are always out for power....they'll use any source as/for a logic to keep power...some are of a sociopathic mind set andt then...somehow ....going to heaven is permission to kill ....crazy people around....stan sand
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David Kavanagh
Date: 1/28/2021 2:44:00 PM
Thanks you Stan sand, absolutely the whole of human history is built on blood, regardless of culture, empire, or religion, peace is always tenuous, as you said til the next sociopath-nut job comes along, cheers David

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