Forewarned

exodus'  plague  had forewarned
dire straits if the first was scorned
 
and first was the crimson tide  
nine more as pharoah defied
 
some millennia since passed  
we come to know how it's caused
 
on bondi's beach there was red  
algae teemed. massively spread  

sea sparkle speaks Moses' tongue  
mend ways or by plagues be stung

~25 Jul 2016~

Australia's Bondi Beach saw the Sea turning red on 27 Nov 2012. Popularly referred to as Crimson Tide it is also called Sea Sparkle or Nocturnal Scintillans, this phenomenon is observed from time to time in various parts of the world and is attributed to a sudden rise in the red algae population due to rising temperatures in sea water and other favourable conditions.

Form: Jueju with 7 syllables per line checked via www.howmanysyllables.com
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Scars Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 11:08 AM
Karam, this is so awesome...and I've never tried this form, I really enjoyed this I may have to try it..well written :)-luloo
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July 25, 2016 at 11:43 AM
Thank you for the "awesome", Laura. It's my first Juju, too.~karam~
Gupta Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 7:16 AM
A very good take on the contest ... GL
Misra Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 9:44 AM
Thank you, Probir. ~karam~
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