Forever Yours

should the moon 
retreat forever 
behind a darkened sky 
and all the stars 
fall earthbound 
without their 
twinkling light 
if the sun should 
cease to rise 
the clouds go 
their separate ways 
and all the birds 
no longer soar 
i still will 
not forget you 
for in all truth 
i am forever yours
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Davis Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 7:59 AM
what a simple and beautiful poem. these words express true emotion and devotion. nice job
Amezimi Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 8:11 PM
this is forever green... simple and beautiful!
Ellison Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 2:28 PM
Are you by any chance related to Annalise Brigham? She is one of my favourite poets here on the Soup! As for "forever yours", very warm and beautifully expressed! Hugs, Jack xox
Tacito Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 1:38 PM
This was very heart-warming & emotionally honest. Very well done!
Fulton Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 12:31 PM
This is very beautiful =)
Andresen Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 10:53 AM
- This is a very well written poem, beautifully! - You write well, Faith.....I like it a lot! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Brigham Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 12:16 PM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise. I'm happy you liked it so much! xoxoFaith
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