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Forever Young

Forever Young In the fading light of day, when verdant fields turn to gray, Even the old weary-eyed wrinkled moon looks lost without its glow. But in my eyes, you are ever young sparkling like a diamond. 02-06-2015 Contest: Glorious Sijo Fields Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Placement: 4th

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Yoshi Mato

Date: 5/31/2015 1:13:00 AM

Quality poem with great visuals!

Funom Makama

Date: 5/28/2015 10:49:00 AM

Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/29/2015 1:17:00 AM

Oh thank you so very much, dear friend for your kind compliments and continued support! Pandita

Shonima Burman

Date: 4/29/2015 9:29:00 AM

Beautifully Penned Pandita

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 4/29/2015 4:20:00 PM

Many thanks dear Shonima for your stopping by with your wonderful compliment which is so encouraging. Warmest regards. Pandita

Shonima Burman

Date: 4/29/2015 9:28:00 AM

Beautifully penned Pandita

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 2/22/2015 4:50:00 AM

Fabulous poem. A most enjoyable, mind teasing read. Well done.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/22/2015 7:41:00 PM

Scott, thank you, thank you. You are so kind to compliment my efforts! I am glad you enjoyed this one! Pandita

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/18/2015 9:58:00 AM

Pandita, congratulations on your win! A lovely Sijo based on the visual. Hugs, Sandra

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/19/2015 12:14:00 PM

Many thanks, my dear Sandra, for your sweet compliments and support! All the best. Pandita

Skat A

Date: 2/15/2015 10:49:00 PM

Pandita, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/19/2015 12:13:00 PM

Thank you so very much, SKAT A, for your continued encouragement and support! I appreciate the sweet compliments. Pandita

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/11/2015 1:43:00 AM

Ah that's so very lovely Pandita,, an obvious winner,, huge congrats!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/11/2015 1:49:00 PM

Dear Dr. Upma, thank you so very much for your sweet words and thank you for your continued encouragement and support. Warmest regards. Pandita.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 2/10/2015 6:49:00 PM

Wonderful poem, and a winner too, by the looks of these comments below. Well done.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/11/2015 1:51:00 PM

Hi Scott, I truly appreciate your visit and your superlative compliments. Thank you!! Warmest regards. Pandita.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/9/2015 3:02:00 PM

Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/9/2015 3:50:00 PM

Thank you, dear Sara. It's nice to hear from you and I always enjoy receiving your compliments. All the best. Pandita

Jan Allison

Date: 2/8/2015 2:18:00 PM

Love your unique take on the theme Pandita - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xxxx

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/8/2015 2:32:00 PM

Many thanks, my dear Jan, for your sweet compliments and support! All the best. Pandita

Michael Miers

Date: 2/8/2015 12:10:00 PM

I could immerse myself in the concinnity and visceral breath and color of this piece. I need to educate myself on 'sijo'. very inspirational. I'm going to try one ( maybe )

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/8/2015 2:31:00 PM

Hi Michael, thank you for visiting and leaving me your superlative compliments. Do try writing the "Sijo" form. Even though I have written a few, each time I attempt one, I do a whole lot of research reviewing the works of the masters to get a better understanding of their technique and styles. Warmest regards. Pandita.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/8/2015 11:22:00 AM

Wonderful Pandita " forever young". congrats on win.Love

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/8/2015 2:26:00 PM

Dear Rajat, thank you so very much for your sweet words. I also thank you for your continued encouragement and support. Warmest regards. Pandita.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/8/2015 8:35:00 AM

Beautiful! Congrats.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/8/2015 2:24:00 PM

Many thanks, my dear Richard, for kindly complimenting this piece. Thank you! Warmest regards. Pandita.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/8/2015 7:13:00 AM

Very 'original' outlook on this visual, Pandita. A very creative Sijo...the ending line is as delightful as the sparkling diamond itself! #7 Congratulations on a lovely win. hugs // paul

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/8/2015 2:22:00 PM

My dear Paul, thank you for your encouraging words which continue to inspire me and support my efforts. Kindest regards. Pandita

Mohan Chutani

Date: 2/8/2015 4:52:00 AM

forever young in heart and feel. congrats Pandita. Mohan

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/8/2015 2:19:00 PM

My friend, I appreciate your wonderful compliments. Thank you. Warmest regards. Pandita

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/8/2015 4:48:00 AM

visually beautiful, just love this Pandita

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/8/2015 2:21:00 PM

Hi Harry, I love your work and thank you so much for complimenting mine. Kindest regards. Pandita

Rob Carmack

Date: 2/8/2015 2:57:00 AM

Congrats Pandita.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/8/2015 2:12:00 PM

Rob, thanks for selecting this piece to read and for your kind words. Pandita.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2015 12:55:00 AM

this one sure has a sweet sentimental quality to it. You made the visual two very unique with your entry. Congrats.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/8/2015 2:10:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea, for honoring this piece with a win! I am very glad you liked it! Warmest regards. Pandita

Eve Roper

Date: 2/6/2015 2:44:00 PM

Very beautiful," You are ever Young". Blessings sweet friend Eve

Eve Roper
Date: 2/6/2015 3:45:00 PM

Thank you for belated birthday, 1-25 you are a treasure

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/6/2015 3:37:00 PM

Oh, you are ever so kind and sweet, dear Eve! I thank you for your continued encouragement and support. I wish you a very happy belated birthday and hope that you will enjoy a wonderful year ahead!!! Hugs and balloons!! Pandita.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/6/2015 1:22:00 PM

I agree, this is clever way to look at that viusal. I enjoyed. BG

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/6/2015 3:33:00 PM

Hi Barbara, I love your work and thank you so much for complimenting mine. Your encouraging words continue to inspire me and support my efforts. Kindest regards. Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 2/6/2015 8:33:00 AM

Hi Pandita, this is a clever take on the visual which you have brought to life very creatively! Well done and good luck in the contest. Hey, this is a winner in my eyes! Kika.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/6/2015 9:20:00 AM

Thank you, dear Kika! I appreciate your kind words. Have a great weekend! Pandita