Forever Winter

FOREVER WINTER Cookie cutter angel t w i n s in the fluffy dough. Woolen arms flap, rolling out wings in the snow. T e n d r i l s of brisk air move about their cheeks. Ice skate heaven smiles with frozen-r e d peaks. The crunch of i c e-crusted icing like crème brûlée. Their kid-size boots disappear into the earth’s cache.* A serpentine scarf wrapped around shoulders twice. The chin-reduction t w i n s dance on chilly white ice. J & J meet in their s t a r r y snowflake schemes, Eden’s wonderland, in their forever winter dreams. 11/27/2017 Any Couplet Contest - Laura Loo Dedicated to mom and her twin**
*Though cache is pronounced “kash.” Some mispronounce as “kash ay” Please except as the latter. It was in the rhyming dictionary. **Mom’s twin passed away in August
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Date: 12/3/2017 3:37:00 PM
this is so cute and clever, Kim. I love it, and congrats for your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/3/2017 6:00:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 12/1/2017 10:53:00 PM
I love the way your poem dances on the page, Kim, . congratulations on a well deserved win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2017 10:58:00 PM
Thank you Eve! <3
Date: 12/1/2017 10:05:00 PM
This is a lovely poem, Kim - takes me back to my own childhood! :) Congratulations on your winning poem and high placement in the contest! :) Bartholomew (P.S. I am so sorry to hear of the passing of your mother's twin. Your poem seems a fitting tribute. My thoughts and prayers are with you and yours.)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2017 10:59:00 PM
I appreciate your lovely words, my friend. She was very special <3
Date: 12/1/2017 2:31:00 PM
Your entry is very beautiful Kim! I loved it! Making angels in the snow...puts a smile on my face. Congratulations on your wonderful placement! : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2017 4:52:00 PM
Thank you Connie :)
Date: 12/1/2017 4:43:00 AM
winter is almost here where I live! (except it was 60 degrees yesterday!) But I love winter. I love the snow-capped pines and snow angels etc...beautiful imagery and outstanding rhythm and rhyme. loved your poem sweet Kim :) thank you and congrats :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2017 6:55:00 AM
Thank you so much, Luloo! <3 Happy Winter!
Date: 11/28/2017 11:14:00 AM
Definitely a portrait of winter, Kim, I really enjoyed it especially the "crunch like Crème Brulee'' xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/28/2017 1:04:00 PM
Thanks! I love crème brûlée!
Date: 11/27/2017 3:16:00 PM
Well written couplet, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/27/2017 3:23:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 11/27/2017 3:08:00 PM
Great couplet Kim, best wishes...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/27/2017 3:23:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie!
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