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Forever together

The day we met Frozen I had my breath No ocean so deep Could contain the serenity I felt They say love is in the air But it's running in my veins Well I know it's little cliche Yet you made me what I am today Now it may be dark But honey just wait for the stars The horizon will kiss the breaking dawn There wil be our forever no matter how far...

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Date: 8/16/2020 8:12:00 PM
"They say love is in the air / But it's running in my veins" - such a lovely and original expression of love, Asmi. Keep writing! ~ John
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Asmi Sharma
Date: 8/17/2020 11:16:00 AM
Thank you sir! Your encouragement means a lot to me.
Date: 8/14/2020 11:45:00 AM
Sweet, Asmi! I especially like the penultimate line, "The horizon will kiss the breaking dawn." Happiness and Health, Gershon
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Asmi Sharma
Date: 8/14/2020 8:06:00 PM
Thank you so much sir. I'm glad you liked it